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zozol32
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Quote zozol32 Replybullet Topic: Revision needed
    Posted: 20 December 2015 at 4:10am
Why there is revision needed on my pixel-art? It's not plagiarism, it's my friends dog ;-;
https://www.dropbox.com/s/qycj1lb5scn99xu/pieselek.png?dl=0
http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/100348.htm
I worked 7 days just to end this, I dont think that's need revision.
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Quote CritiqueMyWork Replybullet Posted: 20 December 2015 at 7:20am
It is a good dog.
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Quote eishiya Replybullet Posted: 20 December 2015 at 8:01am
Was a reason given?
My guess is that your pixel technique feels... off. Your clusters look like something you'd get from tracing a photo (automatically or by hand) without considering what you're drawing - and yet in other areas, you made some great choices. Your dithering is also very strange - you have some oddly sharp transitions, and at times you go from one pair of dithering colours to the next, without using the solid colours which would create a better transition.
In some areas around edges it also looks like you just didn't put in the pixel-level care that's evident around the eyes.

All in all, this just gives the impression of something not entirely hand-made, with the odd choices you made.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 20 December 2015 at 8:33am
Originally posted by eishiya

...this just gives the impression of something not entirely hand-made, with the odd choices you made.


Agree
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Quote zozol32 Replybullet Posted: 20 December 2015 at 9:50am
Originally posted by eishiya


Was a reason given?My guess is that your pixel technique feels... off. Your clusters look like something you'd get from tracing a photo (automatically or by hand) without considering what you're drawing - and yet in other areas, you made some great choices. Your dithering is also very strange - you have some oddly sharp transitions, and at times you go from one pair of dithering colours to the next, without using the solid colours which would create a better transition.In some areas around edges it also looks like you just didn't put in the pixel-level care that's evident around the eyes.All in all, this just gives the impression of something not entirely hand-made, with the odd choices you made.

I used a lot of dithering because i wanted to make fur-effect, it's didnt worked well ;-;
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