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Lytschi
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Quote Lytschi Replybullet Topic: Easter egg
    Posted: 11 March 2016 at 9:45am
So I'm working on this egg:

The base was given by the people hosting the contest.
Here is the base:


I really would like some critic on it.
Is it easy to read?
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Quote RebeaLeion Replybullet Posted: 11 March 2016 at 10:10am
yea, texture is not bad, bunny is well-readable so the flowers. I would alter the shape of an egg and I would make outline with wider scale of colours.

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Quote NancyGold Replybullet Posted: 11 March 2016 at 9:12pm
Flat shading cuts eyes. Consider introducing a light source. I would suggest first shading untextured egg and text applying it as layer to the textured one.
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