Pixel Joint Forum: Fugitive/DuPzØr combo (WIP)

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Fugitive
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Topic: Fugitive/DuPzØr combo (WIP)
Posted: 27 February 2006 at 5:24pm

We need some C&C

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Fugitve is playing on his XBox 360

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DuPz0r
Seaman
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Posted: 27 February 2006 at 5:27pm

Yeah, we need some idea's for our project. What do you think can be added to this scene to liven it up abit?

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Monkey 'o Doom
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Posted: 27 February 2006 at 5:44pm

Ading some people could help, and you've got too many grass and brick colors. Also, the lightsource moves around lots.

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leel
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Posted: 27 February 2006 at 5:46pm

you could add some details to the roofs.. some posts by the road, maybe traffic lights, stop signs.

Also, what's going on with that roof there on the red building? You need to better define whatever effect you were going for, cause i cant tell what its supposed to be like..

good job on the road, I like how you made it look worn out, adds to the realism, it might be a bit too much, but i like it

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jalonso
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Posted: 27 February 2006 at 8:45pm

the light source is undefined at best, that needs fixing for sure. The biggest problem I see here is the scale (lack of). The cars indicate that these buildings are three stories high, yet the huuuuge windows are in some other scale, You only have 2 doors which are as big as a car? The bricks are nice but also don't match the scale. As for what to add it would help if you define the hood, is it industrial, commercial, etc.

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Souly
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Posted: 28 February 2006 at 8:24am

Maybe toss in some random small and wacky event going on.

I am the jesus of PJ.

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dr.feng
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Posted: 28 February 2006 at 8:55am

get rid of the blackoutlines

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WIP (Work In Progress)
Pixel Joint Forum : Pixel Art : WIP (Work In Progress)

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Fugitive Commander Joined: 28 June 2021 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 466	Topic: Fugitive/DuPzØr combo (WIP) Posted: 27 February 2006 at 5:24pm
	We need some C&C Edited by Fugitive
	Fugitve is playing on his XBox 360
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DuPz0r Seaman Joined: 01 February 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 31	Posted: 27 February 2006 at 5:27pm
	Yeah, we need some idea's for our project. What do you think can be added to this scene to liven it up abit?
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Monkey 'o Doom Commander Joined: 24 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2994	Posted: 27 February 2006 at 5:44pm
	Ading some people could help, and you've got too many grass and brick colors. Also, the lightsource moves around lots.
	RPG is numberwang.
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 27 February 2006 at 5:46pm
	you could add some details to the roofs.. some posts by the road, maybe traffic lights, stop signs. Also, what's going on with that roof there on the red building? You need to better define whatever effect you were going for, cause i cant tell what its supposed to be like.. good job on the road, I like how you made it look worn out, adds to the realism, it might be a bit too much, but i like it
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 27 February 2006 at 8:45pm
	the light source is undefined at best, that needs fixing for sure. The biggest problem I see here is the scale (lack of). The cars indicate that these buildings are three stories high, yet the huuuuge windows are in some other scale, You only have 2 doors which are as big as a car? The bricks are nice but also don't match the scale. As for what to add it would help if you define the hood, is it industrial, commercial, etc.
	PJs FAQ <•> Sticky Reads
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Souly Commander Joined: 13 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2451	Posted: 28 February 2006 at 8:24am
	Maybe toss in some random small and wacky event going on.
	I am the jesus of PJ.
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dr.feng Midshipman Joined: 16 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 87	Posted: 28 February 2006 at 8:55am
	get rid of the blackoutlines
	http://www.vectory.mybin.biz
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