Pixel Joint Forum: Constructive criticism needed for my last 3 PDs

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   Heya guys!

Last week I wanted to test some new animation techniques, and did it through participating in 3 consecutive Pixel Dailies, here they are!:

I would love to hear all of your opinions, the good, the bad and the ugly.

Hearing what's good / what you like not just as an artist but as a viewer, would also be great help!

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Chironyx Midshipman Joined: 03 February 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 12	Topic: Constructive criticism needed for my last 3 PDs Posted: 18 February 2019 at 10:30am
	Heya guys! Last week I wanted to test some new animation techniques, and did it through participating in 3 consecutive Pixel Dailies, here they are!: I would love to hear all of your opinions, the good, the bad and the ugly. Hearing what's good / what you like not just as an artist but as a viewer, would also be great help!
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NancyGold Commander Joined: 27 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 526	Posted: 19 February 2019 at 5:54am
	That disco mirror ball is hard to read. I suggest you to make it large, then flat-shade each of its mirror tiles with separate brightness, maybe add some bloom or sparks. Or maybe you can put the scene as whole inside one huge disco ball. Also rays light rays could be made less jerky and more readable too. Here is some reference footage: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XXA-bQj5n9Q https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VSC6tVgz5Co https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1us9WiqTtB8
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