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Edgaretto
Seaman
Joined: 23 January 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2 |
![]() Topic: WIP BWRY Challenge FeedbackPosted: 30 January 2020 at 4:28am |
Any feedback is apreciated. I'm new at this |
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NancyGold
Commander
Joined: 27 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 526 |
![]() Posted: 02 February 2020 at 12:02pm |
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1. The camel anatomy a bit strange. Especially humps. Looks like a mix between a bactrian and a dromedary camels. 2. The yellow sky is out of place, unless you have a sand storm. But if it is indeed sandstorm, vision would be really foggy. 3. Pyramids have some projection problems. Same with the road. They look non-eucldeian. Remember, euclidean projection is linear. 4. The palette hurts eyes. It is both low contrast and bland. I've edited your art with alternative palette and sky. ![]() |
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Edgaretto
Seaman
Joined: 23 January 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2 |
![]() Posted: 05 February 2020 at 6:25pm |
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Thanks
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