Pixel Joint Forum: Be honest, what y'all think of about this?

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https://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/137167.htm

I'm started this pixel thing last year, and I plan on getting way better in 2021, so all feedback is greatly appreciated.

Thank you in advance for your answers

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wonderingwellow Seaman Joined: 23 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2	Topic: Be honest, what y'all think of about this? Posted: 14 January 2021 at 7:46am
	https://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/137167.htm I'm started this pixel thing last year, and I plan on getting way better in 2021, so all feedback is greatly appreciated. Thank you in advance for your answers
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Mike9377 Midshipman Joined: 20 November 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 37	Posted: 14 January 2021 at 2:19pm
	It is pretty good, but the fireworks are all the same, except for being different colors. It would just look more interesting if there was some variance to them. The buildings and sky look good.
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Maye Midshipman Joined: 27 November 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 97	Posted: 19 January 2021 at 9:32am
	When you launch a fireworks you dont see how it fly, just see the explosion surprise you. Try deleting the pixeles upping to the sky. Make the differents explosion in difrents time, no at all the same time. Show the 2020 and differents irregular explosion on background. Play the the form of explosions.
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