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MattVonFat
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Quote MattVonFat Replybullet Topic: WIP Superhero
    Posted: 08 March 2006 at 4:45pm
Hi,

This is the character I'm working on at the moment for one of my games. It's MattVonFat - ready to rid the world of evil!



C&C is welcome of course.

I personally don't think he quite looks the part yet. I think the colours are a bit iffy and I'm not sure how his eye holes should be done.

Is there anything else anyone can see that is wrong with him?

Thanks for any feedback,
Matthew
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 08 March 2006 at 4:58pm
I don't know what you wish to convey with fatty here but, the cape color is too feminine for the green/red colors, range/purple might work better. The shorts are to flat a bit of concave backwards with the belly hanging OVER the shorts will make him plumper (is that a word). The arms seem too short. And give him some boots in a diff color, a superhero must.
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Quote MattVonFat Replybullet Posted: 09 March 2006 at 12:50pm
Thanks. I looke dta what you mentioned and had a go at fixing him up a bit.



The middle one is pretty much the same as the last one except for the cape so you can see how I have the arms. I'm not too sure about the legs (or rather leg) in the last two. It took a while to get something I was slightly happy with and my brother said it looked ok to him so I went for it.

Again all C&C is welcome.

Thanks,
Matthew
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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 09 March 2006 at 5:08pm

aw the poor man is deaf, some ears would certainly help.

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