Pixel Joint Forum: WIP Superhero

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   Hi,

This is the character I'm working on at the moment for one of my games. It's MattVonFat - ready to rid the world of evil!

C&C is welcome of course.

I personally don't think he quite looks the part yet. I think the
colours are a bit iffy and I'm not sure how his eye holes should be
done.

Is there anything else anyone can see that is wrong with him?

Thanks for any feedback,

Matthew

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MattVonFat Seaman Joined: 31 October 2005 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Topic: WIP Superhero Posted: 08 March 2006 at 4:45pm
	Hi, This is the character I'm working on at the moment for one of my games. It's MattVonFat - ready to rid the world of evil! C&C is welcome of course. I personally don't think he quite looks the part yet. I think the colours are a bit iffy and I'm not sure how his eye holes should be done. Is there anything else anyone can see that is wrong with him? Thanks for any feedback, Matthew
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 08 March 2006 at 4:58pm
	I don't know what you wish to convey with fatty here but, the cape color is too feminine for the green/red colors, range/purple might work better. The shorts are to flat a bit of concave backwards with the belly hanging OVER the shorts will make him plumper (is that a word). The arms seem too short. And give him some boots in a diff color, a superhero must.
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MattVonFat Seaman Joined: 31 October 2005 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Posted: 09 March 2006 at 12:50pm
	Thanks. I looke dta what you mentioned and had a go at fixing him up a bit. The middle one is pretty much the same as the last one except for the cape so you can see how I have the arms. I'm not too sure about the legs (or rather leg) in the last two. It took a while to get something I was slightly happy with and my brother said it looked ok to him so I went for it. Again all C&C is welcome. Thanks, Matthew
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 09 March 2006 at 5:08pm
	aw the poor man is deaf, some ears would certainly help.
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