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Dra_chan
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Quote Dra_chan Replybullet Topic: My WIP to submit in the proyect
    Posted: 02 March 2006 at 2:09pm


What do you think? What can I add? Random thoughts?
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 02 March 2006 at 2:19pm
Just shadows. Less is more. <3 kitty
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 02 March 2006 at 5:11pm
The dresser needs the same highlight as the other wood peices.
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Quote Dra_chan Replybullet Posted: 02 March 2006 at 9:19pm
Mmm, yeah, I will put  shadows, and now looking at it, the dresser really needs the same shading. I was thinking about adding some plants and paintings in the wall but I guess it will look to full. Thanks for your C+C and let them keep coming!
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Quote Dra_chan Replybullet Posted: 02 March 2006 at 11:48pm

Ok, I added some shadows

EDIT: Aah I want to submit this now, I make a very bad pixel artist, I have no patience at all lol



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Quote TheRat Replybullet Posted: 03 March 2006 at 5:36am
I hear you on that one.

It is looking great, Maybe some shadows on the bead head, it looks almost as painted on the wall
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 03 March 2006 at 7:15am
@drachan, your shadows are all over the place. The dresser is coreect the other pieces are not, kitty needs a shadow too :)
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Quote Dra_chan Replybullet Posted: 03 March 2006 at 10:26am
Oh yeah, I see where I could add a shadow for the bed head, thanks!
@ jalonso: how can I improve the shadows in the other pieces? It would be alright if I just put a shadow next to the darkest blocks, to match the shadow of the dresser?
Aaarg forgot the cat's shadow, typical
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 03 March 2006 at 8:36pm
what I meant was that the shadow on the dresser and the wall hanging goes from right to left, but the desk, nightable, waistbasket and curtain go left to right. The bed has both which looks like a rug. Dresser is correct. Don't forget the kitty 
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Quote Dra_chan Replybullet Posted: 03 March 2006 at 9:46pm
Originally posted by jalonso

what I meant was that the shadow on the dresser and the wall hanging goes from right to left, but the desk, nightable, waistbasket and curtain go left to right. The bed has both which looks like a rug. Dresser is correct. Don't forget the kitty 


Weee, got it! Thanks for your patience!
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Quote Dra_chan Replybullet Posted: 09 March 2006 at 10:18pm
I fixed the shadows in the iso. I wonder if this is what jalonso meant.




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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 09 March 2006 at 10:42pm
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Quote Dra_chan Replybullet Posted: 09 March 2006 at 10:50pm
YAY!!!!! 
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 10 March 2006 at 9:27am
I think a poster on the left wall would be cool.
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Quote Dra_chan Replybullet Posted: 11 March 2006 at 12:46am
Originally posted by Aleiav

I think a poster on the left wall would be cool.


I thought about that, but then I thought the room would look kind of overloaded. I will add one and see how it looks though, because you are the second person who tells me that.
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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 11 March 2006 at 4:14am
due to this being isometric view, we would not see the night sky out
of the window, it looks good just not physically correct.

great improvements btw.   
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Quote alkaline Replybullet Posted: 11 March 2006 at 6:33am
yeh, uh, normally you would eventually see the ground and whatever's on the ground
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Quote Dra_chan Replybullet Posted: 11 March 2006 at 1:17pm
Thanks shark! Mmm, my logic was that I'm on the tenth floor, so all you would see is the sky. Should I put like, buildings far away or something?
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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 11 March 2006 at 1:18pm
I wouldn't change it; I had a sky on my room, and it seemed to be fine w/ peeps here.

RPG is numberwang.
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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 11 March 2006 at 1:27pm
dont change it, jus trying to improve my physics.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 11 March 2006 at 3:55pm
This room was fine and already uplaoded DraChan. Start a new room 
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Quote Dra_chan Replybullet Posted: 11 March 2006 at 3:57pm
Hehe, I'm thinking abouth making a house or building 
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