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..::Naso::..
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Topic: military Gun ship.
Posted: 12 April 2006 at 4:24am

just wanted to make a space ship because i never made one before this is what i came up with, Left of the red line is the "New" part and right of the line is the "old" part.

C&c always kool :D

PS: the gun i want to make it attached to the ship but i want to make it so when it shoots em they move back. but i don't know how to make it look connected and still do that.

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EyeCraft
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Posted: 12 April 2006 at 6:00am

Looking quite nice. The colours a pretty nice, and the design is cool.

Only prob I can see with it at the moment is you have a mash of perspectives; some of it is top-down, the 2nd module in from the left is 3/4 from the ships back, the cylinder in the middle is 3/4 from the ships front.

So I'd suggest deciding exactly what angle the ship is being viewed from and correct it. I would probably do it 3/4 view if I were you, but yeah, whatever

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Pixel_Outlaw
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Posted: 12 April 2006 at 7:14am

Very nice! I like the colors and design. Professional. I think the ship making is catching on. I love this kind of VG art and yours it better than many of mine. The only thing i don't like so far is the contour lines on the inner body it throws it out of perspective.

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..::Naso::..
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Posted: 12 April 2006 at 5:10pm

eyecraft : Thanks :D , and iam dont really get what you are meaing by "perspectives" :S sorry

pixel_outlaw : thanks, ship makeing might be catching on but what is really popular are fighter sprites :P to bad i sux at anatomy :D, yea i might have to remake thows later :)

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EyeCraft
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Posted: 12 April 2006 at 6:07pm

Just a quick edit to give you an idea of matching up the perspectives. Changed it to have a more 3/4 view

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..::Naso::..
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Posted: 12 April 2006 at 6:44pm

ahh....i see what you mean, i like the 3/4th view alot more then top down :D a little more work but better out come, thanks :)

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Andy Tran
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Posted: 12 April 2006 at 11:14pm

You should mirror it. Sometimes, mirror something can create light source inconsistencies. So you should try to becareful.

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..::Naso::.. Commander Joined: 13 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200	Topic: military Gun ship. Posted: 12 April 2006 at 4:24am
	just wanted to make a space ship because i never made one before this is what i came up with, Left of the red line is the "New" part and right of the line is the "old" part. C&c always kool :D PS: the gun i want to make it attached to the ship but i want to make it so when it shoots em they move back. but i don't know how to make it look connected and still do that. Edited by ..::Naso::..
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EyeCraft Commander Joined: 07 July 2005 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 425	Posted: 12 April 2006 at 6:00am
	Looking quite nice. The colours a pretty nice, and the design is cool. Only prob I can see with it at the moment is you have a mash of perspectives; some of it is top-down, the 2nd module in from the left is 3/4 from the ships back, the cylinder in the middle is 3/4 from the ships front. So I'd suggest deciding exactly what angle the ship is being viewed from and correct it. I would probably do it 3/4 view if I were you, but yeah, whatever
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Pixel_Outlaw Commander Joined: 01 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3829	Posted: 12 April 2006 at 7:14am
	Very nice! I like the colors and design. Professional. I think the ship making is catching on. I love this kind of VG art and yours it better than many of mine. The only thing i don't like so far is the contour lines on the inner body it throws it out of perspective. Edited by Pixel_Outlaw

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..::Naso::.. Commander Joined: 13 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200	Posted: 12 April 2006 at 5:10pm
	eyecraft : Thanks :D , and iam dont really get what you are meaing by "perspectives" :S sorry pixel_outlaw : thanks, ship makeing might be catching on but what is really popular are fighter sprites :P to bad i sux at anatomy :D, yea i might have to remake thows later :) Edited by ..::Naso::..
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EyeCraft Commander Joined: 07 July 2005 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 425	Posted: 12 April 2006 at 6:07pm
	Just a quick edit to give you an idea of matching up the perspectives. Changed it to have a more 3/4 view
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..::Naso::.. Commander Joined: 13 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200	Posted: 12 April 2006 at 6:44pm
	ahh....i see what you mean, i like the 3/4th view alot more then top down :D a little more work but better out come, thanks :)
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Andy Tran Seaman Joined: 07 January 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 39	Posted: 12 April 2006 at 11:14pm
	You should mirror it. Sometimes, mirror something can create light source inconsistencies. So you should try to becareful.
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