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megamanbellotti
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Topic: Pixel apartmentt
Posted: 24 May 2005 at 5:42pm

any sugestions

thx

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TakeOut
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Posted: 24 May 2005 at 7:19pm

Originally posted by megamanbellotti

any sugestions

thx

A very fresh and nice start. Don't be afraid to add some texture in to the room and some more colour! Also the bed look's a bit strange with the covers like that at the ends.

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megamanbellotti
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Posted: 24 May 2005 at 7:27pm

yea its hard im working on it texturs are hard to get

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sedgemonkey
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Posted: 24 May 2005 at 10:32pm

Just pick one item at a time and add some texture. Also, the furniture arrangement looks odd. Everything is evenly spaced and nothing overlaps. It looks like everything is floating. Overlapping is an easy way to give the feeling of depth.

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megamanbellotti
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Posted: 25 May 2005 at 1:16pm

Originally posted by sedgemonkey

Just pick one item at a time and add some texture. Also, the furniture arrangement looks odd. Everything is evenly spaced and nothing overlaps. It looks like everything is floating. Overlapping is an easy way to give the feeling of depth.

true ill mess around with it

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megamanbellotti
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Posted: 05 June 2005 at 8:48pm

ok got another one

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Psychotic_Carp
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Posted: 05 June 2005 at 8:55pm

nice work so far but i think the walls need something ?

got game?

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Gamma
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Posted: 05 June 2005 at 9:01pm

Add some pictures on the wall, maybe a coat rack in the corner.

G

Man, I got ownage *Puts on coolio shades*
Pleh.

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megamanbellotti
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Posted: 06 June 2005 at 6:15am

Originally posted by Gamma

Add some pictures on the wall, maybe a coat rack in the corner.

G

hmmmmm coat rack

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megamanbellotti
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Posted: 07 June 2005 at 2:19pm

ok sorry for the double post but i have an edited version with some pictures added

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pixelblink
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Posted: 08 June 2005 at 11:01am

I think you need to put your own style on this as I did help you out some with some things. Some ideas:
-pillows on the bed
-wires from the xbox to the tv like you had before
-the desk looks out of place since everything else has highlighted edges and this one doesn't ... i'd change that
- the mirror looks odd... the shine doesn't work too well and it looks like it's going behind the dresser when it probably should stand on top of it... give it some definition.
- the frames don't look right either... the iso lines go awry on the edges it looks like.
- lastly, the images inside the frams look like they are photos that you skewed a bit to fit inside and aren't really pixelled... if they are, forgive that comment and move on.

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megamanbellotti Seaman Joined: 21 May 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Topic: Pixel apartmentt Posted: 24 May 2005 at 5:42pm
	any sugestions thx
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TakeOut Commander Joined: 27 March 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 147	Posted: 24 May 2005 at 7:19pm
	*Originally posted by megamanbellotti* any sugestions thx A very fresh and nice start. Don't be afraid to add some texture in to the room and some more colour! Also the bed look's a bit strange with the covers like that at the ends.
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megamanbellotti Seaman Joined: 21 May 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Posted: 24 May 2005 at 7:27pm
	yea its hard im working on it texturs are hard to get
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 24 May 2005 at 10:32pm
	Just pick one item at a time and add some texture. Also, the furniture arrangement looks odd. Everything is evenly spaced and nothing overlaps. It looks like everything is floating. Overlapping is an easy way to give the feeling of depth.
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megamanbellotti Seaman Joined: 21 May 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Posted: 25 May 2005 at 1:16pm
	*Originally posted by sedgemonkey* Just pick one item at a time and add some texture. Also, the furniture arrangement looks odd. Everything is evenly spaced and nothing overlaps. It looks like everything is floating. Overlapping is an easy way to give the feeling of depth. true ill mess around with it
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megamanbellotti Seaman Joined: 21 May 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Posted: 05 June 2005 at 8:48pm
	ok got another one
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Psychotic_Carp Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1008	Posted: 05 June 2005 at 8:55pm
	nice work so far but i think the walls need something ?
	got game?
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Gamma Seaman Joined: 09 April 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 9	Posted: 05 June 2005 at 9:01pm
	Add some pictures on the wall, maybe a coat rack in the corner. G
	Man, I got ownage Puts on coolio shades Pleh.
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megamanbellotti Seaman Joined: 21 May 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Posted: 06 June 2005 at 6:15am
	*Originally posted by Gamma* Add some pictures on the wall, maybe a coat rack in the corner. G hmmmmm coat rack
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megamanbellotti Seaman Joined: 21 May 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Posted: 07 June 2005 at 2:19pm
	ok sorry for the double post but i have an edited version with some pictures added
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pixelblink Commander Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865	Posted: 08 June 2005 at 11:01am
	I think you need to put your own style on this as I did help you out some with some things. Some ideas: -pillows on the bed -wires from the xbox to the tv like you had before -the desk looks out of place since everything else has highlighted edges and this one doesn't ... i'd change that - the mirror looks odd... the shine doesn't work too well and it looks like it's going behind the dresser when it probably should stand on top of it... give it some definition. - the frames don't look right either... the iso lines go awry on the edges it looks like. - lastly, the images inside the frams look like they are photos that you skewed a bit to fit inside and aren't really pixelled... if they are, forgive that comment and move on.
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