Pixel Joint Forum: blu fighter sprite, near completion.

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i suck at hands. plz rough CnC. i think everything else looks neat except for the hands.

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tuaarita Commander Joined: 04 December 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1049	Topic: blu fighter sprite, near completion. Posted: 02 June 2006 at 8:19am
	i suck at hands. plz rough CnC. i think everything else looks neat except for the hands.
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Stitchy Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 09 June 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 405	Posted: 02 June 2006 at 9:05am
	Hmm, this is looking really nice so far~ :0 Two things I wanna point out, though, for both versions... 1) His right leg is what makes the pose look awkward. To start out, I would shift his leg so that his knee and toes are facing towards the right. 2) The lightsource on his hair is kinda wrong... the back of his head should be shaded with the grey so that it matches the shadows on the clothes. Can't wait to see more. ;D
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tuaarita Commander Joined: 04 December 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1049	Posted: 02 June 2006 at 9:16am
	thanks, heres the new one. any better? you know i just might make a portrait of this and send it to king of spriters :D Edited by Leroy
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Hazviz Seaman Joined: 29 May 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 33	Posted: 02 June 2006 at 9:17am
	Hey, It's looking great so far. The hands on the first one are a little off, but on the second one they look great. Am I right in thinking he will be firing some sort of energy ball or is this just his normal fihting stance? (Just seems a bit odd to be a stance ) Keep it up Edit* On the newer one you posted, maybe make his right leg bend back a bit.. kind of like... \|\ / / ...maybe hehe Edited by Hazviz
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Stitchy Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 09 June 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 405	Posted: 02 June 2006 at 9:26am
	Yes, Hazviz has the right idea. Good improvement there, Leroy~ Just try and follow the little diagram Hazviz put up there. :>
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tuaarita Commander Joined: 04 December 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1049	Posted: 02 June 2006 at 9:35am
	? :D
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Stitchy Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 09 June 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 405	Posted: 02 June 2006 at 9:44am
	Maybe a little more bending. :o Just a little bit~
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tuaarita Commander Joined: 04 December 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1049	Posted: 02 June 2006 at 10:08am
	edit: bended leg "a little bit." whipped this up: took like 20 minutes? :S Edited by Leroy
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Pixel_Outlaw Commander Joined: 01 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3829	Posted: 02 June 2006 at 10:14am
	You have good skills but he seems like an average joe.... Perhaps you caould make him soeme more style? Every fighter in a game has an uniue look well except some from the King of Fighters series.

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tuaarita Commander Joined: 04 December 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1049	Posted: 02 June 2006 at 10:17am
	but he has, like, powers of a supersaiyan. :D and i dont have imaginary.
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Souly Commander Joined: 13 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2451	Posted: 02 June 2006 at 10:34am
	His foot is either floating or prospetic. Because the toes should at least fold a bit.
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tuaarita Commander Joined: 04 December 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1049	Posted: 02 June 2006 at 11:03am
	had to: (and souly tried to fix the toe. there is a little fold.) what do you think? Edited by Leroy
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Pixel_Outlaw Commander Joined: 01 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3829	Posted: 02 June 2006 at 12:08pm
	perhaps a trenchcoat?

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Hazviz Seaman Joined: 29 May 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 33	Posted: 02 June 2006 at 12:46pm
	Definately looks alot better with the right leg bent, good job. But I agree that he lacks a certain something that would make him stand out like he should do in a fighting game... Don't know about anyone else, but he reminds me of John Mcenroe the eccentric tennis player Dont ask why, lol. Edited by Hazviz
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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 08 January 2026 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 02 June 2006 at 12:50pm
	his leg was best in the first one, with the foot facing us completely, because it was a more consistant twist in his body. right now he twists right (legs to torso) and back left (torso to hands and head)
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 02 June 2006 at 4:09pm
	He doesn't really look engaged in a fight. Maybe a more angry expression or have him on both legs crouched down?
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