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Skull
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   Topic: Zaibatsu Corp.Posted: 27 May 2006 at 3:53am |
 Seems a bit.. blank to me. |
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Shark
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Posted: 27 May 2006 at 5:58am |
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Originally posted by Skull
Seems a bit.. blank to me. you critted urself, lol, why not fix it then!! |
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Snark, we love yuu.
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Skull
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Posted: 27 May 2006 at 7:17am |
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Originally posted by Shark Originally posted by Skull
Seems a bit.. blank to me. you critted urself, lol, why not fix it then!! Because... I really don't know what to add.  |
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Larwick
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Posted: 27 May 2006 at 7:19am |
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floor tiles, fix the shading on the tables n stuff, add a clock, and a cabinet/drawers.... theres lots if you try hard enuff.
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jalonso
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Posted: 27 May 2006 at 11:55am |
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What is it? a Lab?
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Skull
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Posted: 27 May 2006 at 12:24pm |
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Originally posted by jalonso What is it? a Lab? More or less... yes. |
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Stitchy
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Posted: 28 May 2006 at 9:53am |
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Good start.~
Some stronger shading would help, especially on the grey areas. A computer screen on one of the walls would be nice... and maybe an ID checker thing by the door? Overall, I think it just needs more variety in color~ :0 |
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Fhqwhgads
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Posted: 28 May 2006 at 3:54pm |
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Under and over the desk to the wall to the right should have cabinate doors. I like it so far!
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jalonso
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Posted: 29 May 2006 at 12:16am |
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I would consider a very yextured floor to make the starkness stand out.
Other details that can be added are loads of beakers, jars with stuff
in them, cabinets doors, shelves, metal countertops, wall charts. Chop,
chop.
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Skull
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Posted: 29 May 2006 at 2:48am |
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Just quickly added floor/ wall tiles, door/card reader, and thank you for all the ideas
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Aleiav
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Posted: 29 May 2006 at 7:11pm |
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Better with the tiled floor, but how about a highlight on the floor to make it seem more 3D. Just put a highlight line after each horizontal line.... er, that sounded confusing. If you don't understand, let me know. :P
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Skull
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Posted: 30 May 2006 at 2:13am |
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Originally posted by Aleiav Better with the tiled floor, but how about a highlight on the floor to make it seem more 3D. Just put a highlight line after each horizontal line.... er, that sounded confusing. If you don't understand, let me know. :P Oh, I get you.. I'll experiment with that, thanks. |
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Pixel_Outlaw
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Posted: 30 May 2006 at 7:57am |
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Hehe why not have like rabbits and monkeys with lipstick on and like makeup and hairspray? And a rat with a lipstick shoved in it's mouth?
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Skull
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Posted: 30 May 2006 at 1:14pm |
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Originally posted by Pixel_Outlaw Hehe why not have like rabbits and monkeys with lipstick on and like makeup and hairspray? And a rat with a lipstick shoved in it's mouth?  I would, but animal rights people will lynch me and It's a pharmesutical (sp) company - note the tiny disected pills on the table. |
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Psychotic_Carp
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Posted: 04 June 2006 at 6:23pm |
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The constant use of one tone of grey for the outlines might be your problem, maybe use a different color on the outlines or different sections?
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 got game?
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Pixel_Outlaw
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Posted: 05 June 2006 at 9:13am |
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They have to test the pills then, how about "Molly, the drug chimp" in the corner. Hehe a burnt-out monkey would be funny.
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Monkey 'o Doom
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Posted: 05 June 2006 at 10:25am |
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Says you. >_>
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RPG is numberwang. |
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Pixel_Outlaw
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Posted: 05 June 2006 at 10:40am |
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Oops....i forgot we have a resident monkee.....
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Skull
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Posted: 05 June 2006 at 12:12pm |
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I've mustered up this - after a little while
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Pixel_Outlaw
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Posted: 05 June 2006 at 12:16pm |
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I think the wall tiles are a bit too much. You might consider just like some light grey trim at the top of the walls for decoration or something and loose the wall tiles.
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