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Quote Joboman Replybullet Topic: Revision?
    Posted: 25 June 2006 at 12:09pm

I submitted this piece last night but I'm not sure what's wrong with it. It says that it needs to be revised. Any help is appreciated.

 
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Quote CDI Replybullet Posted: 25 June 2006 at 12:23pm
It could use some anti ailasing on the edges, and some less saturated colours
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Quote Joboman Replybullet Posted: 25 June 2006 at 12:24pm
i have no idea what that means lol.  I just use microsoft paint and I don't know what those terms mean
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Quote CDI Replybullet Posted: 25 June 2006 at 12:26pm

YAY for tuts!



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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 25 June 2006 at 1:43pm
You're dither pattern isn't used very well.
Try darker colors, it's too bright.

Also, it might be nice to add transparency.

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Quote halfDemon Replybullet Posted: 25 June 2006 at 2:07pm

Up the contrast. Nice lineart, though.
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Quote Larwick Replybullet Posted: 25 June 2006 at 2:09pm
Moved to WIP section.

Seeing as you have MSPaint you're pretty much suited out for pixelart. If you don't want to add transparency i suggest giving it an interesting yet not distracting background.

It needs AA (anti-aliasing), less gradient shading, keep your palette small and refined, and up the contrast. Tutorials, reference pictures and investigating all the different terms in pixelart should help you greatly.

Use this to find out about AA etc..
http://pixel-arts.org/pixipedia/ 
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Quote Artisan Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2006 at 5:02am
it needs to have a background which is suited to the piece or be
transparrent i think
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