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Quote spaz Replybullet Topic: Bio-Lab room
    Posted: 16 June 2006 at 12:13pm

Hello i am new to pixel art, i was wondering if i should upload this to the joint. Also how do I make the background in my PNG's Transparent

 

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/2397/zombieroom2tw.png

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There is my room, please tell me if it is any good.
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2006 at 12:16pm

Why would they have a giant sign just to say "Test Failed" ?


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Quote spaz Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2006 at 12:20pm

Because they are stupid and need it to be sure.

 

EDIT 1: also what did you upload my picture with?

 

EDIT 2: i just realised this is the wrong place to post this. I shall make a new topic in the joint section, sorry.



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Quote Larwick Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2006 at 12:24pm
No need, i'll move this one.

Okay so, the general joint looks pretty well done. There are some things that could do with improving, such as the wobbly text, textureless part on the top of the walls and the fact the red text is quite hard to read at first glance.

Perhaps you could add a few more things aswel, as quite alot of the floor seems quite plain.

Keep it up ~

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Quote spaz Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2006 at 12:27pm

Thank you Larwick, you truly are the son of Jesus

 

EDIT: thanks i will get to work  

 

EDIT: *w00t* NEW VERSION link below

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/1101/zombieroom17yg.png

oh and how do yuo get these into the actual joint apartments



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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2006 at 1:03pm
I didn't upload your photo with anything all I did was clicked the little tree icon when I post an I submited the URL you supplied in the feild it asks.



I think there should be a table in the middle of the room.
I mean, they weren't testing a standing subject now were they?

Also, the man who's shooting his pants have no shading.


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Quote Larwick Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2006 at 1:27pm

Once you've submitted them to the gallery and they've been accepted they'll be put into the joint apartments automatically. Huzzah.

Rightyho then. The yellow things by his feet dont stand out well atall, and seem a bit too long to me (if they're what i think they are... although i dont know the name). The black lines on the people make it seem very unfinished also, perhaps change them for something that fits the colour of their clothes, skin and hair.

Also i just noticed that the holster for his gun is the wrong way around.. heheh.

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Quote spaz Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2006 at 12:53am

Cheers I will submit this in a bit when i have put some more effort into this

 

EDIT: what do you think of this hmmmm. Now with added table.

 

http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/8087/zombierooml2pt.png

 

 



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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2006 at 10:20pm
Looks nice. i would remove the black linework on the table since you don't use it elsewhere. Nice job!
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Quote spaz Replybullet Posted: 18 June 2006 at 5:04am
You are right, thanks
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Quote Skull Replybullet Posted: 18 June 2006 at 9:37am
Very nice - I'd add perhaps a tad more blood on the table and some details on the walls/floor, a bit of texture since they seem rather bland. The ideas good, I'll give you that, Great work with the guys behind the glass..

Oh - make the Test Failed flash


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Quote spaz Replybullet Posted: 27 June 2006 at 2:33am
 

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Quote Larwick Replybullet Posted: 27 June 2006 at 6:22am

*Ahem*

What is that for, spaz?
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Quote CDI Replybullet Posted: 27 June 2006 at 11:12am

I belive... that that would be considered iSpam
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