Pixel Joint Forum: Big Iso City [finished]

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   Weeel it looks like it's not going to be a commission after all. *le sigh* ah well. Thanks for the crits all. :)

Edited by Aleiav - 20 July 2006 at 4:16pm

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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Topic: Big Iso City [finished] Posted: 17 July 2006 at 11:29am
	Weeel it looks like it's not going to be a commission after all. le sigh ah well. Thanks for the crits all. :) Edited by Aleiav - 20 July 2006 at 4:16pm
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Lawrence Commander Joined: 30 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 481	Posted: 17 July 2006 at 11:38am
	Looks pretty nice so far. I especially like the texture on the trees. Iso cities are always cool, this one looks great so far. Edited by Lawrence - 17 July 2006 at 2:47pm
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Propergander Seaman Joined: 30 May 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 17 July 2006 at 2:53pm
	The park looks awesome, but you need to keep everything in proportion. The bench looks like it's the same size as the door.
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 17 July 2006 at 2:58pm
	oops XD runs to edit the bench edit: Fixed. :D Edited by Aleiav - 17 July 2006 at 3:15pm
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 17 July 2006 at 10:07pm
	Scale is the most important part of iso cities. Seems you have several scales atm.
	PJs FAQ <•> Sticky Reads
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 18 July 2006 at 2:48am
	Great so far.. The Colours seem a tad off to me.. I don't know why.

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Psychotic_Carp Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1008	Posted: 18 July 2006 at 5:40am
	If you want the buildings to look more cohesive then they all should have the same look, I mean old style briks or newer glass and steel buildings
	got game?
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 18 July 2006 at 9:50am
	nods, thanks for the crits all. @ jal: yeah, I was looking at the buildings today and some of them are really huge for the sort of small people that would be roaming the city if I had people. @ skull: I agree. This is why I stick to greyscale. I suck at choosing colors. >_< But, practice, practice, practice. @ psychotic_carp: nods, indeed. point taken. The more I look at the photo labs building, the more I absolutely hate it. I think it throws off everything and it's much too large. Hopefully I'll be doing a lot more today to make this look better. Wish me lucks! I shall be updating soon.
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 18 July 2006 at 2:11pm
	large update!
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Psychotic_Carp Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1008	Posted: 18 July 2006 at 7:40pm
	Its looking A lot better now, but hwy did you make the tubes behind the sighn 90°? kthnxbye noob... Edited by Psychotic_Carp - 18 July 2006 at 7:41pm
	got game?
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Lawrence Commander Joined: 30 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 481	Posted: 18 July 2006 at 8:01pm
	*Originally posted by Psychotic_Carp* Its looking A lot better now, but hwy did you make the tubes behind the sighn 90°? kthnxbye noob... You never know, they could be sloping downwards.
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iSTVAN Commander Joined: 03 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 626	Posted: 18 July 2006 at 11:50pm
	The grass is too busy at the moment, if you ask me. Simplify it so it doesn't distract so much from the image.
	Listen to what the flower people say...
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 20 July 2006 at 2:33pm
	Thanks for the crits everyone. :) @ Carp: my attempts at making it differently didn't look very well at all. It always ended up looking choppy. If you can make an edit, be my guest. @iSTVAN: duelly noted and fixed. I'm not sure if this grass tile is better or not.
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Buzz Midshipman Joined: 13 June 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 94	Posted: 20 July 2006 at 2:57pm
	I like the desaturated verson much better.

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Psychotic_Carp Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1008	Posted: 20 July 2006 at 10:02pm
	?
	got game?
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 21 July 2006 at 10:49pm
	I took it down since I was pulling myself to do it in the first place and it's not going to be a commission so I'd rather move on.
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