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TakeOut
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Joined: 27 March 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 147 |
![]() Topic: My BedRoom - FINISHED!Posted: 04 May 2005 at 3:47pm |
![]() This is going to be an exact replica of my room. I still got some more things to add of course like the curtains, my bed, my computer and it's desk, and the door. ![]() That's a tv and a gamecube and games under it btw. I couldn't do much detail on them with such little area. I tried to add a lil texture in to the wood floor as well as the nightstand if you noticed. I think it look's a bit shoddy. I need to work on textures and stuff.... I just liked how Pixel Blink did all his nice textures and gave it a try. ![]() The window is really bothering me, I'm not sure whether to redo it or keep it. Curtains will go over half of it anyways.... so it could look better. Oh, and the painting, I dunno. I drew it thinking I was going to put it in, and then later rejected it, as I have no such thing in my room. Don't be afraid to give some negative comments, as I really want to improve on isometric stuff. Edited by TakeOut |
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sedgemonkey
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![]() Posted: 04 May 2005 at 3:50pm |
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I think the window looks pretty good and it'll work nicely with your curtains. The TV looks just a smidge squished vertically... unless of course you have a widescreen TV. |
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pixelblink
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![]() Posted: 04 May 2005 at 7:13pm |
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the lighting and shading looks reversed. Should have it switched around if you take notice of the walls. The lamp looks great. I'd make the TV bigger though... not a fan of the 10" televsions
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TakeOut
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Joined: 27 March 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 147 |
![]() Posted: 05 May 2005 at 8:52pm |
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Originally posted by pixelblink the lighting and shading looks reversed. Should have it switched around if you take notice of the walls. The lamp looks great. I'd make the TV bigger though... not a fan of the 10" televsions ![]() Doh, Just noticed that. Thanks for pointing it out. I'll fix it in the next edit. By the next edit I'll hopefully have the bed done. As for the tv, it isn't actual size, and it's frickan hard for me to work in this space cause I have to squeeze in my computer desk and computer to the left of it. I might try to fix it later. Edited by TakeOut |
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TakeOut
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![]() Posted: 12 May 2005 at 5:57pm |
![]() Update número uno.cinco: Added a computer in, mouse, pencil holder, and a book. Also moved the entertainment stand a tad to the right. In the next few updates, you should see a chair, bed, trashcan, gamecube controller, and the curtains. I also am thinking about moving the picture above the computer, as there is more space there for it, or I may just remove it completely. This will be my first isometric room ever, and I think it's coming along pretty fine. edit: finally fixed the shading, and made the desk a bit taller. Edited by TakeOut |
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sedgemonkey
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![]() Posted: 12 May 2005 at 6:57pm |
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It's coming along nicely, but the proportions are a little off. The desk seems just a smidge short -- compare it to the height of your nightstand.
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TakeOut
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![]() Posted: 12 May 2005 at 8:10pm |
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Originally posted by sedgemonkey It's coming along nicely, but the proportions are a little off. The desk seems just a smidge short -- compare it to the height of your nightstand. Thanks, I'll add that to my list. So, I don't forget. Edit: fixed it. :) Edited by TakeOut |
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Monkey_man
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![]() Posted: 14 May 2005 at 11:32am |
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this actually looks really cool... and you have a really nice bedroom
nothing bad i have to say about it right at this moment but maybey as you progress ill find something that i can critisize you about
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www.engedientertainment.com/phpbb is my forum POST YOUR PIXELS
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sedgemonkey
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![]() Posted: 14 May 2005 at 12:18pm |
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One thing that will help you with your perspective in the future is to actually use an example person in your scene. |
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TakeOut
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![]() Posted: 14 May 2005 at 7:50pm |
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Originally posted by sedgemonkey One thing that will help you with your perspective in the future is to actually use an example person in your scene. Alright, but I don't think I'll be doing that on this piece. It'll be squished enough as it is when it's finished. Edited by TakeOut |
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pixelblink
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![]() Posted: 14 May 2005 at 8:21pm |
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looking great dude. Some suggestions: paint your walls, fill up that empty space, have some naked chicks dancing... lol.. jk (maybe) |
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TakeOut
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![]() Posted: 16 May 2005 at 9:52pm |
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Originally posted by pixelblink looking great dude. Some suggestions: paint your walls, fill up that empty space, have some naked chicks dancing... lol.. jk (maybe) My walls are actually that color though. Or pretty damn close to it, so I didn't bother to change it. All the space should be gone after I add the bed in and door.... 2 naked chicks in my bed with me inbetween. That'd be awesome. XD But I think I'm just going to stick with the room alone.. Edited by TakeOut |
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TakeOut
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![]() Posted: 30 May 2005 at 9:53am |
![]() Update 2: Yet, another update. The final will include the door, the bed, and maybe a gamecube controller. Then I should be done. :3 In this update, I added a trash can, a seat for the computer desk, as well as the curtains. Edited by TakeOut |
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sedgemonkey
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![]() Posted: 30 May 2005 at 1:09pm |
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The chair, mouse and trashcan help a lot. Good job. The curtains don't look like they are lining up properly... wouldn't they cover the edges of the window? Where are you going to put a door? A door isn't necessary if you can't fit it. |
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TakeOut
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![]() Posted: 31 May 2005 at 8:36am |
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Originally posted by sedgemonkey The chair, mouse and trashcan help a lot. Good job. The curtains don't look like they are lining up properly... wouldn't they cover the edges of the window? Where are you going to put a door? A door isn't necessary if you can't fit it. Yeah, I'll fix the curtains, maybe I should darken them a bit more aswell. I may just leave out the door. Not sure yet. |
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TakeOut
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![]() Posted: 29 June 2005 at 4:07pm |
![]() FINISHED!!!! When added please put it right next to Zi's room. ^____^ |
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kiwidesign
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Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95 |
![]() Posted: 29 June 2005 at 5:13pm |
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nice room!
....isn't the bed a bit little? |
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zi-double
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![]() Posted: 29 June 2005 at 11:36pm |
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I like furniture and chair ... I say in DA, with another comment /for floor and scales for some details/ Good colours you have in this work ... I think only blue is very contrast ! If you have time, try to make shadows ... ================ :) GDGB :) |
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