The reflection would span out in the way of the mirror, not straight down.

no it wouldnt.

I think he meant ... no it wouldn't spread out
and he's right ...

Let us know what you think needs work so we can tell you what to fix.  Right now, theres nothing out of the ordinary about it.  And since I dont know what your goal is, its impossible to crit. :(

I'm experimenting with reflection so C&C on that would be good, but I don't wish the eye to be drawn to the reflection to much...  

looking good.. keep up with the good work

Looks great. I like the geryscale version better. Of course an animated one that changes colors could look cool too.

Agreed with those above. The greyscale looks cooler.

First one was 100 time better, cause of the underlight you gave it, it looks much more realistic and much less flat. This text is bland and uninteressting, since its completely outlined with 1 color. i say stick with the first one or make a colored version of it but keep the underlighted style

This one ---->

You have left some black outlining on the letter U.
It would look better if the letter just before the solid green is a lighter green/fade as it moves across.

Edited by Fugitive - 20 September 2006 at 3:08am