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    Posted: 26 July 2006 at 8:31am
Need some C&C Please

 

 


Edited by Fugitive - 01 August 2006 at 6:54pm
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bullet Posted: 26 July 2006 at 10:38am
Tire grip.. and the top frame of the car could be showing.. quite nice overall.
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bullet Posted: 26 July 2006 at 10:41am
Nice work, but It looks sort of flat. I'd recommend deciding where the lightsource(s) is going is be then colour it according to that.
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bullet Posted: 26 July 2006 at 3:23pm
take a look at d-p's gallery for references, he's the man when it comes to cars.
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bullet Posted: 26 July 2006 at 6:57pm
Originally posted by Shark

take a look at d-p's gallery for references, he's the man when it comes to cars.
 
Yeah! I know
 
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bullet Posted: 26 July 2006 at 7:21pm
Looks pretty good so far, I think it should sit lower though
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bullet Posted: 29 July 2006 at 8:54am

Thanks d-p for all your help..
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bullet Posted: 29 July 2006 at 9:05am
Much better now! Great stuff.
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bullet Posted: 29 July 2006 at 9:11am
Ah, that's a lot better Fugitive! The front window being reflected on the bonnet and the white specular shine on the window make it looks much better. On thing which still stands out to me are the headlights. Should that black area in them really be there?
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bullet Posted: 29 July 2006 at 10:06am
Originally posted by Fugitive

Thanks d-p for all your help..

Wow, that's great! Huge improvement :)
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bullet Posted: 29 July 2006 at 5:40pm
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Wow, that's great! Huge improvement :)
 
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bullet Posted: 29 July 2006 at 7:08pm
anyone who can afford a car like that probably  can afford those expensive black head lights.  but yes, they look right to me
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bullet Posted: 31 July 2006 at 1:12pm

Should I try using different color ?
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bullet Posted: 31 July 2006 at 1:58pm
Actually ignore what I said. I was thinking that the headlights were silver-coloured, but if they're black then they look fine.
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bullet Posted: 01 August 2006 at 4:08pm
I tried one of the other colors, I just need some C&C on the shading..
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bullet Posted: 01 August 2006 at 4:57pm
You need to add contrast to the orange, and consider removing the black lines unless they're a part of the paint job. In the white one, you have highlights near the wheels, but the orange tone loses that detail.

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bullet Posted: 02 August 2006 at 2:18pm
Originally posted by Monkey 'o Doom

You need to add contrast to the orange, and consider removing the black lines unless they're a part of the paint job. In the white one, you have highlights near the wheels, but the orange tone loses that detail.
 
k, I'll fix that.. 
 
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Edit: Is this any better ?
 
 
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bullet Posted: 02 August 2006 at 7:55pm
Much better. I have no crits really anymore, except for the tires being a bit bland, and that might require a new color (You'd have to check to see if the dark grey you have would look okay there).

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bullet Posted: 03 August 2006 at 3:38am
Originally posted by Monkey 'o Doom

Much better. I have no crits really anymore, except for the tires being a bit bland, and that might require a new color (You'd have to check to see if the dark grey you have would look okay there).
 
Should I do the other colors ?
 
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bullet Posted: 03 August 2006 at 7:17am
Try and do other cars aswell, or it's just basic recolouring.
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bullet Posted: 03 August 2006 at 8:02am
Originally posted by Skull

Try and do other cars aswell, or it's just basic recolouring.
 
I was thinking of doing all seven colors then using it for a sig...
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bullet Posted: 03 August 2006 at 10:43am
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Originally posted by Skull

Try and do other cars aswell, or it's just basic recolouring.
 
I was thinking of doing all seven colors then using it for a sig...


Fair enough - but if you were to post them in your gallery, I'd suggest all in one image.
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bullet Posted: 13 October 2006 at 12:47pm
sry i find it ugly a bit i think it needs a bit more shading..apart from this it is ok i guess
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bullet Posted: 13 October 2006 at 1:49pm
Originally posted by chess

sry i find it ugly a bit i think it needs a bit more shading..apart from this it is ok i guess


Why do you keep bringing back old posts?
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bullet Posted: 13 October 2006 at 2:24pm
Originally posted by chess

sry i find it ugly a bit i think it needs a bit more shading..apart from this it is ok i guess


sry i find u 2 b a dick-head who cnt type pr0perly. LOCKITUP!
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bullet Posted: 13 October 2006 at 5:04pm
Originally posted by chess

sry i find it ugly a bit i think it needs a bit more shading..apart from this it is ok i guess


If you're going to go as far as to say something is "ugly", the least you can do is make a better suggestion about HOW he can improve it other than "needs a bit more shading".
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bullet Posted: 14 October 2006 at 11:14am
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