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Quote zeid Replybullet Topic: A Killing Machine
    Posted: 11 October 2006 at 8:30am

A piece I've been working on lately, curious as to what people think needs work. I intend to add it to the gallery soon as I think it's close to completion, unless of course lots of Crits come up. 
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 11 October 2006 at 8:43am
Something about the legs look wrong. They don't quite match the anatomical scale for the torso. Too thin and devoid of any musculature. I suspect you might get a few "feet, not grounded" type of crits. I would also revisit your lines and use some selout to soften some of the more jagged areas.
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Quote EyeCraft Replybullet Posted: 11 October 2006 at 9:23am
Great detail! The legs are definately the biggest problem, rework them. Then the jaggies, sel-out + AA should fix it up nicely, then I think this will look very shmick =D
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Quote zeid Replybullet Posted: 11 October 2006 at 9:48am
Thanks for the crits so far, Yer ive definately been getting a lot of complaints about the legs. I will rework those a fair bit, im not the best when it comes to selOut so that may take me a while
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Quote chess Replybullet Posted: 13 October 2006 at 12:42pm
let the legs if they should be so
what is that for a weapon? it looks ugly sry
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 13 October 2006 at 5:14pm
Originally posted by chess

let the legs if they should be so
what is that for a weapon? it looks ugly sry


okay, wtf? Seriously. You make no sense. "let the legs if they should be so" ??  And if you think the weapon looks ugly, make a suggestion on how to change it.

Zeid, I think the legs should be a bit more thicker. I like the way the fabric hangs on the body, but I would get rid of the highlight on the weapon. I'd also add a foot.

Good shading!
 
[EDIT: lezz be nicer pls :)]



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Quote zeid Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2006 at 12:21pm
Thanks for the crits so far guys and gals. This latest update hasnt attended to the legs yet im afraid and still needs a fair bit but I've been really busy actually im finishing off a 3000 word essay right now sorry.
 


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