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Carl Flixen
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Quote Carl Flixen Replybullet Topic: strange musician
    Posted: 15 October 2006 at 2:39pm
Apart from the shading, as more improving it.

Because of it I ask for help.



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Quote EyeCraft Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2006 at 5:45pm
Hi there, problems I see apart from shading:

Anatomy is out of proportion, the legs need to be longer and thicker, the hands and feet larger, the head smaller, and he has no neck!

The pose is rigid and unconvincing.

Good luck with it
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Quote Carl Flixen Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2006 at 6:20pm
But if I enlarge the arms i should enlarge the guitar.

thank for you opinion.
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Quote Blick Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2006 at 7:48pm
I doubt you'd have to enlarge the guitar then. And even so, it' should be too hard to do so in comparison to fixing all the anatomy.
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Quote Yar Replybullet Posted: 16 October 2006 at 12:24am
Reminds me a bit of Frank Black...

My 2 cents: You might want to move the legs together a bit. And, the strap generally goes from the neck of the guitar to the shoulder (the left shoulder of your guy in this case) then behind the back and then towards the peg at the bottom of the guitar (although, it COULD go anyway you like, really).
If these are stylistic choices than ignore the above.

Interesting style and nice work!
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