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    Posted: 16 October 2006 at 2:45pm
This is a WIP for a competition on a gaming forum, and the prize has great value to me, so I really want the best cc i've ever heard :)

The host wants his signature to contain himself hitting the quarterback hard, and making him drop the ball.. etc. I don't know much about american football, so it's normal if you see terminology errors of any sort :D
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I've been wrestling with anatomy problems all over, and have worked a lot on the defender (or whatever it is). His leg to upper body ratio used to be 1.5 to 1 a few days ago XD.

There are so many problems I'm trying to fix that I won't list them , but it would really help if I could get some tips on how to solve them better!

Thanks for your time,
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Edited by ceddo - 16 October 2006 at 2:50pm
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Quote mancolt24 Replybullet Posted: 16 October 2006 at 2:46pm
nice!
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Quote MurrMan Replybullet Posted: 16 October 2006 at 5:37pm
a very good start, but i dont like the dithering on the soxs. it does not match the rest of the shading. you should be consistent
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Quote Macks Replybullet Posted: 16 October 2006 at 7:12pm
If he was a good defender, his head would be on the otherside. You typicaly allign your helmet with the ball to give that extra pop and force the fumble.
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Quote ceddo Replybullet Posted: 17 October 2006 at 1:31am
Oh goody then :D
I just got informed that the ball should be on the other side by the competition host!

@murrman: I just started basic shading on everything, and yeah, i think i did overdither the socks, but I wanted texture. I'll try to level it down and see what it looks like.
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