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Psychotic_Carp
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Topic: xbox
Posted: 25 October 2006 at 5:51pm

here is an xbox

got game?

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Seaman
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Posted: 25 October 2006 at 6:14pm

Toosmall.

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Cryssy
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Posted: 25 October 2006 at 6:18pm

I will slightly agree with Help Please...that compared to the Game Cube it is a little small

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Psychotic_Carp
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Posted: 25 October 2006 at 7:04pm

Its to scale with all the other ones i have made

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Suicidale
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Posted: 25 October 2006 at 7:18pm

holy crap u gave me a really good collab idea! ill pm it to you

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Larwick
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Posted: 26 October 2006 at 3:04am

It looks far too grey at the moment i think. Make it more black, and give it more contrast. Perhaps make it a greenish black or something to add some interest. Also, maybe make it a pixel taller? Keep it up.

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PixelSnader
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Posted: 26 October 2006 at 5:39am

its too small. it's smaller then the PS1 icon you made.

you allso got the relative height wrong, the xbox is a thick thing

i agree about the grey comment, make it darker (adding a slight blue tone usually works good for me, just a tip) and isnt the xbox slightly curved?

and i believe the x should take up more space on the lid

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Skull
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Posted: 26 October 2006 at 11:48am

Nicely done, but it should be much darker.. and snader, I'm going to contridict you by saying darker green tones are best.

For example the controller, looks black, but with a bit of light, is a dark shade of green.

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Psychotic_Carp
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Posted: 26 October 2006 at 2:09pm

I darkened it

but its not that visible on a CRT :(

I didnt want to change the hue any.

I also increased the height by 2.

Yes it slightly curved, the slightly part is why I didnt pixel that in

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Larwick
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Posted: 26 October 2006 at 3:18pm

Hmm, i think you need to be much more daring with your colour choices. Even if you dislike the results, it's always good to see so you are sure you're going in the right direction. You want the viewer to immediately know that this is what it's supposed to be, but with the dull gray it's hard to tell it's meant to be black. In fact, unless you didn't know i can imagine not realising atall.

I won't go on about it any more. It's a nice little sprite.

Edited by Larwick - 26 October 2006 at 3:18pm

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Psychotic_Carp
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Posted: 26 October 2006 at 8:46pm

Thankyou, I think my biggest problem is that, although its a good system, its not that good looking to me so I dont have want to do a great job on it :(

got game?

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Psychotic_Carp Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1008	Topic: xbox Posted: 25 October 2006 at 5:51pm
	here is an xbox
	got game?
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Help Please, Seaman Joined: 19 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 31	Posted: 25 October 2006 at 6:14pm
	Toosmall.
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Cryssy Midshipman Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94	Posted: 25 October 2006 at 6:18pm
	I will slightly agree with Help Please...that compared to the Game Cube it is a little small
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Psychotic_Carp Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1008	Posted: 25 October 2006 at 7:04pm
	Its to scale with all the other ones i have made
	got game?
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Suicidale Midshipman Joined: 22 January 2006 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 48	Posted: 25 October 2006 at 7:18pm
	holy crap u gave me a really good collab idea! ill pm it to you
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Larwick Commander Joined: 18 July 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015	Posted: 26 October 2006 at 3:04am
	It looks far too grey at the moment i think. Make it more black, and give it more contrast. Perhaps make it a greenish black or something to add some interest. Also, maybe make it a pixel taller? Keep it up.

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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 21 May 2026 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 26 October 2006 at 5:39am
	its too small. it's smaller then the PS1 icon you made. you allso got the relative height wrong, the xbox is a thick thing i agree about the grey comment, make it darker (adding a slight blue tone usually works good for me, just a tip) and isnt the xbox slightly curved? and i believe the x should take up more space on the lid
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 26 October 2006 at 11:48am
	Nicely done, but it should be much darker.. and snader, I'm going to contridict you by saying darker green tones are best. For example the controller, looks black, but with a bit of light, is a dark shade of green.

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Psychotic_Carp Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1008	Posted: 26 October 2006 at 2:09pm
	I darkened it but its not that visible on a CRT :( I didnt want to change the hue any. I also increased the height by 2. Yes it slightly curved, the slightly part is why I didnt pixel that in
	got game?
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Larwick Commander Joined: 18 July 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015	Posted: 26 October 2006 at 3:18pm
	Hmm, i think you need to be much more daring with your colour choices. Even if you dislike the results, it's always good to see so you are sure you're going in the right direction. You want the viewer to immediately know that this is what it's supposed to be, but with the dull gray it's hard to tell it's meant to be black. In fact, unless you didn't know i can imagine not realising atall. I won't go on about it any more. It's a nice little sprite. Edited by Larwick - 26 October 2006 at 3:18pm

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Psychotic_Carp Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1008	Posted: 26 October 2006 at 8:46pm
	Thankyou, I think my biggest problem is that, although its a good system, its not that good looking to me so I dont have want to do a great job on it :(
	got game?
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Topic: xbox