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Quote Scotteh Replybullet Topic: My First Rpg sprite (I Hope)
    Posted: 09 December 2006 at 4:23am
Hopefully I got the perspective right
 
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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 09 December 2006 at 8:33am
anatomy looks bad. look in a mirror. what shape is your head?
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 09 December 2006 at 8:39am
Good start. The head is a bit too round even if its meant to be cartoony. The shading style is lacking a bit. A lightsource coming from left or right will look better.
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Quote Scotteh Replybullet Posted: 09 December 2006 at 10:30am
Ok, Expect an update soon.
 
EDIT: Heres that update


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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 09 December 2006 at 5:41pm
try making the head thinner, and why is he bald?
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