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Twizzler
Midshipman
Joined: 16 November 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 82 |
![]() Topic: Beach ScenePosted: 26 December 2006 at 9:59am |
Hi. I can't really think of anything to talk about so...
Tell me what you think :)
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Ohm
Seaman
Joined: 15 December 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 16 |
![]() Posted: 26 December 2006 at 1:29pm |
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Some of the shapes are really jagged. The umbrella and handbag(?) mostly. And the sand ends, is that a dune, or the shore? The reflection of the sun should be longer, you could do some cool wavy effects on that. Everything lacks perspective too, what are those square things? If they're beach towels, you shouldn't be seeing them head on like that. And without shading, that beach ball is just an iron cross in a red circle.
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Twizzler
Midshipman
Joined: 16 November 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 82 |
![]() Posted: 26 December 2006 at 4:04pm |
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well.. thats why its WIP. I try not to shade until the end because im usually resizing and shaping things and it would be a waste of time. The handbag is a poorly drawn pale and the rectangles are towels. I didn't really have any reference pictures. I was on vacation pixeling on my laptop with no internet.
I'll get to work with the perspective.
One thing I forgot to say when I started the topic - How should I texture the sand/water? |
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