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Farmero
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Joined: 26 May 2006 Location: Poland Online Status: Offline Posts: 28 |
![]() Topic: Du'dictatorPosted: 13 February 2007 at 4:43am |
![]() Umm? Any C&C? Edited by Farmero - 13 February 2007 at 4:42am |
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jalonso
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![]() Posted: 13 February 2007 at 5:22am |
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Great color choices.
The penguin itself is too unbalanced. Arms too long, boots not 'weighty' enough, hat too flat, beak too big. |
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Farmero
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Joined: 26 May 2006 Location: Poland Online Status: Offline Posts: 28 |
![]() Posted: 13 February 2007 at 8:13am |
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i know, it is caricature of one of politicians - he is walking like that and ruler i s that this politician in unanatomical small ;P
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Monkey 'o Doom
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Joined: 24 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2994 |
![]() Posted: 13 February 2007 at 9:09am |
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Sounds like a bad critique dodge.
Even if the politician is small, they should be in compliance with the standards for what you're using to convey their persona--penguins don't have hands or arms so you could use to change that and the general body shape needs work. Even in caricatures there is the presence of basic anatomy and physics--that penguin-thing is going to fall over.
I have to disagree with jalonso about your colors. While the majority of the colors are acceptable as colors, the darkest yellow looks too greenish. And in relation to the subject matter, why is the piece monochromatic yellow anyway? Wouldn't greyscale do better with a penguin? They are primarily black and white, after all. If you do choose to use a colored palette, be sure to represent the coloration of real penguins with variations in luminosity.
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Farmero
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Joined: 26 May 2006 Location: Poland Online Status: Offline Posts: 28 |
![]() Posted: 13 February 2007 at 9:47am |
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Darkest Yellow? Green? O.O Monkey are you daltonist? xD
It's gold ;P
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Monkey 'o Doom
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![]() Posted: 13 February 2007 at 9:55am |
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The darkest gold is too green, then. Excuse my error; I was under the impression that gold generally had a metallic sheen. I thought it was yellow-orange and abbreviated as yellow.
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Pieface
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Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
![]() Posted: 13 February 2007 at 3:42pm |
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I agree with MoD about the shading. Another thing you could do is improve the boots a tad bit by not looke like its skin tight on him
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