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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Topic: Pixeldam illegal car dealer
    Posted: 15 February 2007 at 1:48am
I want to get this on pixeldam.. But its much too empty right now..
Do you guys have any idea's what to add, or how to improve it??
I am going to animate the car lights and the well (or however its called in english.. the round thing in the middle, a head should come out :p)

Any other idea's how I can improve this, or some nice detail idea's??


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Quote Skull Replybullet Posted: 15 February 2007 at 3:36am
The do NOT enter part looks rather poor. And like, normal text. Not too keen on the Graff Piece, either.. though, I like those birds. ;P
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 15 February 2007 at 3:55am
How would you do those letters than?
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 15 February 2007 at 11:44pm
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Quote Skull Replybullet Posted: 16 February 2007 at 4:48am
Originally posted by Lollige

How would you do those letters than?


Manually..
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 16 February 2007 at 7:38pm
Kind of a crazy scene but works too. The things that are truly off is the scale and form of the guy sitting and smokig which doesn't match the other folks. The cop car is way too small for the people. The sign that is 'borrowed' from Pixeldam looks odd because the pixlelling style does not match yours. The do not enter text is horrid, ditch that (skull, you kill me, lol). Tyhe circle sign on the front is not the best iso circle, try to work on that, or make it square, octagon works well, USA, USA! Again, the scene has potential but you'll need to keep an eye on quality not quantity pixels.
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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 16 February 2007 at 7:52pm
in addition to what jalonso said, the gas pump isnt to scale, the way you have it, the people would have to reach and jumpt o grab the handle
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross.
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 17 February 2007 at 12:43am
Ok if you look at the sitting guy on the first image and the second, you can see I allready edited a bit, but ill try to make it a bit larger again..
Also I will try to make the car a bit bigger, but I think its allmost at the good size..
Im not very good with putting stuff in the right scale..
But I think that its not very hard to change the benzine thing too..

I dont think a squared sign will look nice, so I will just keep trying to make it rounder..  I still have no idea about how I should fix the do NOT enter...
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 07 March 2007 at 2:52am
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49913952/
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