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Jonathan
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Topic: Isometric Garage | First Post
Posted: 09 March 2007 at 1:01pm

Please drop a line and tell what I can improve...

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Christopher
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Posted: 09 March 2007 at 1:03pm

Some AA on the lines especcialy the sidewalk wouldnt hurt.

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leel
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Posted: 10 March 2007 at 12:54pm

I disagree, those are clean lines and don't require anti-aliasing. At least not yet. I suppose you'll add some texture?

I don't like the sidewalk that way, it would be extremely hard to make a car fit into that perfectly. Cars turn in curves, not right angles. So I'd suggest you make the entrance on the same plane as the sidewalk and then add a little ramp so that cars could get up on it.

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Posted: 18 May 2007 at 9:38pm

i think something needs to be added, it dosnt feel quite finished yet..

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Drag
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Posted: 18 May 2007 at 10:34pm

That light gray feels too much like a background color. Try making the non-sidewalk portions a darker gray or something. Is it supposed to be a street? Maybe add some street markings, like the dashed lines. Maybe a stop sign, since that looks like an intersection. ;)

I'm not sure what, but something about the roof texture doesn't feel right... Sorry if that's too vague, I honestly am not sure what's strange about it.

Edit: D'oh! I didn't see that this was a bump. I'll look more carfully next time.

Edited by Drag - 19 May 2007 at 8:41am

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Posted: 19 May 2007 at 5:54am

guys, it's been more than two months. Until there is an update there's no point in posting critique, it's obvious that Jonathan isn't checking this anymore. Come on.

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Jonathan Seaman Joined: 08 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Topic: Isometric Garage \| First Post Posted: 09 March 2007 at 1:01pm
	Please drop a line and tell what I can improve...
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Christopher Commander Joined: 09 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 110	Posted: 09 March 2007 at 1:03pm
	Some AA on the lines especcialy the sidewalk wouldnt hurt.
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 10 March 2007 at 12:54pm
	I disagree, those are clean lines and don't require anti-aliasing. At least not yet. I suppose you'll add some texture? I don't like the sidewalk that way, it would be extremely hard to make a car fit into that perfectly. Cars turn in curves, not right angles. So I'd suggest you make the entrance on the same plane as the sidewalk and then add a little ramp so that cars could get up on it.
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onyx Seaman Suspended Joined: 14 March 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 24	Posted: 18 May 2007 at 9:38pm
	i think something needs to be added, it dosnt feel quite finished yet..
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Drag Seaman Joined: 18 May 2007 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Posted: 18 May 2007 at 10:34pm
	That light gray feels too much like a background color. Try making the non-sidewalk portions a darker gray or something. Is it supposed to be a street? Maybe add some street markings, like the dashed lines. Maybe a stop sign, since that looks like an intersection. ;) I'm not sure what, but something about the roof texture doesn't feel right... Sorry if that's too vague, I honestly am not sure what's strange about it. Edit: D'oh! I didn't see that this was a bump. I'll look more carfully next time. Edited by Drag - 19 May 2007 at 8:41am
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 19 May 2007 at 5:54am
	guys, it's been more than two months. Until there is an update there's no point in posting critique, it's obvious that Jonathan isn't checking this anymore. Come on.
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