Pixel Joint Forum: [wip] My house interior, first ISO pixelart

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Cliffo
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Topic: [wip] My house interior, first ISO pixelart
Posted: 21 March 2007 at 7:30am

Hi guys, this is my first go at any type of pixel art.

I spent about an hour or a bit more on each room.

After getting this far, i've realised i sort of messed up the scale a bit.

All critics welcome

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jalonso
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Posted: 21 March 2007 at 10:00am

Is this 2 Joint rooms?
yup, some things are out of scale.

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ceddo
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Posted: 21 March 2007 at 10:26am

Lol, I love the mini couch! :P

TO make this post less useless, add more texture to things, and don't use black outlines as much (it makes things look messy). Just outline the floor's cracks with a darker colour of the wood.

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Cliffo
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Posted: 21 March 2007 at 9:36pm

Originally posted by jalonso

Is this 2 Joint rooms?
yup, some things are out of scale.

Yeah it is, I know theres some work to be done where i joined them. I wasn't planning on joining them but what the hell.

Might ditch it and start a new one, and keep a scale this time lol.

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onyx
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Posted: 18 May 2007 at 9:37pm

its ok, but i rekon you should maybe makke the walls 3d and maybe scale things better, but nice!

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Drag
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Posted: 18 May 2007 at 10:26pm

I'd say add some depth to that wall in the middle... it looks paper thin! :D

Also, be more consistant with the highlighted edges. For example, the couch and the table in the leftmost room have highlights on the outward edges, but the speakers (rectangular thing next to the tv, I'm assuming it's a speaker), and the black chairs don't have the highlighted edges.

That top part of the wall on the fireplace also looks a little strange.

However, it's not bad for a first try! :D

Edit: Once again, I didn't see that this was a two-month old bump...

Edited by Drag - 19 May 2007 at 8:46am

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Cliffo Seaman Joined: 21 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Topic: [wip] My house interior, first ISO pixelart Posted: 21 March 2007 at 7:30am
	Hi guys, this is my first go at any type of pixel art. I spent about an hour or a bit more on each room. After getting this far, i've realised i sort of messed up the scale a bit. All critics welcome
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 21 March 2007 at 10:00am
	Is this 2 Joint rooms? yup, some things are out of scale.
	PJs FAQ <•> Sticky Reads
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ceddo Commander Joined: 01 June 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 466	Posted: 21 March 2007 at 10:26am
	Lol, I love the mini couch! :P TO make this post less useless, add more texture to things, and don't use black outlines as much (it makes things look messy). Just outline the floor's cracks with a darker colour of the wood.
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Cliffo Seaman Joined: 21 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 21 March 2007 at 9:36pm
	*Originally posted by jalonso* Is this 2 Joint rooms? yup, some things are out of scale. Yeah it is, I know theres some work to be done where i joined them. I wasn't planning on joining them but what the hell. Might ditch it and start a new one, and keep a scale this time lol.
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onyx Seaman Suspended Joined: 14 March 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 24	Posted: 18 May 2007 at 9:37pm
	its ok, but i rekon you should maybe makke the walls 3d and maybe scale things better, but nice!
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Drag Seaman Joined: 18 May 2007 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Posted: 18 May 2007 at 10:26pm
	I'd say add some depth to that wall in the middle... it looks paper thin! :D Also, be more consistant with the highlighted edges. For example, the couch and the table in the leftmost room have highlights on the outward edges, but the speakers (rectangular thing next to the tv, I'm assuming it's a speaker), and the black chairs don't have the highlighted edges. That top part of the wall on the fireplace also looks a little strange. However, it's not bad for a first try! :D Edit: Once again, I didn't see that this was a two-month old bump... Edited by Drag - 19 May 2007 at 8:46am
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