Pixel Joint Forum: [WIP] Is this looking alright?

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Christopher
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Topic: [WIP] Is this looking alright?
Posted: 13 February 2007 at 4:44pm

Just wanted an opinion on this.

Supposed to look like a jail cell?

Edited by Christopher - 13 February 2007 at 5:48pm

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Ensellitis
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Posted: 13 February 2007 at 4:47pm

wrong forum, moving...

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jalonso
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Posted: 13 February 2007 at 8:07pm

It does look like a jail cell. The way the blocks meet in the corner is weak and the bars in the window, the only element which clearly state its a cell is too muted atm. For once I say use black.

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Varock Shade
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Posted: 14 February 2007 at 3:38am

Originally posted by jalonso

It does look like a jail cell. The way the blocks meet in the corner is weak and the bars in the window, the only element which clearly state its a cell is too muted atm. For once I say use black.

I dont know exactly what you mean with the last thing, but my opinion about the bars is that you should make them darker. Also, you are already using 22 colours, which can be reduced to about 10, because you wont see the difference to many colours. Also, as jalonso said, the blocks meet eachother the wrong way... looks very good so far, but do add some things like rats, a bit of blood and details you would find in the average jail, or the jail you see in cartoons...

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AdrianJensen
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Posted: 30 March 2007 at 1:58pm

looks pretty sweet.

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Metaru
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Posted: 30 March 2007 at 6:14pm

also, if i'm rigth( and this is for the Joint), you shouldn't change the colors of the walls.

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Hapiel
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Posted: 31 March 2007 at 3:24am

Originally posted by Metaru

also, if i'm rigth( and this is for the Joint), you shouldn't change the colors of the walls.

You mean the outern walls? (the black part)
Not shure..

Yes it looks like a jail

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Christopher Commander Joined: 09 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 110	Topic: [WIP] Is this looking alright? Posted: 13 February 2007 at 4:44pm
	Just wanted an opinion on this. Supposed to look like a jail cell? Edited by Christopher - 13 February 2007 at 5:48pm
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Ensellitis Commander Joined: 19 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10099	Posted: 13 February 2007 at 4:47pm
	wrong forum, moving...
	ಠ_ಠ There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross.
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 13 February 2007 at 8:07pm
	It does look like a jail cell. The way the blocks meet in the corner is weak and the bars in the window, the only element which clearly state its a cell is too muted atm. For once I say use black.
	PJs FAQ <•> Sticky Reads
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Varock Shade Commander Joined: 29 March 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 303	Posted: 14 February 2007 at 3:38am
	*Originally posted by jalonso* It does look like a jail cell. The way the blocks meet in the corner is weak and the bars in the window, the only element which clearly state its a cell is too muted atm. For once I say use black. I dont know exactly what you mean with the last thing, but my opinion about the bars is that you should make them darker. Also, you are already using 22 colours, which can be reduced to about 10, because you wont see the difference to many colours. Also, as jalonso said, the blocks meet eachother the wrong way... looks very good so far, but do add some things like rats, a bit of blood and details you would find in the average jail, or the jail you see in cartoons...
	http://www.mega.freeforums.org/ < PJ Member Dran's Multimedia and RP Forum
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AdrianJensen Commander Joined: 18 January 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 238	Posted: 30 March 2007 at 1:58pm
	looks pretty sweet.
	My gallery lives here: http://www.pixeljoint.com/p/8355.htm?pg=1&sec=icons
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Metaru Commander Joined: 03 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 30 March 2007 at 6:14pm
	also, if i'm rigth( and this is for the Joint), you shouldn't change the colors of the walls.
	I ate leel's babies
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Hapiel Rear Admiral Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266	Posted: 31 March 2007 at 3:24am
	*Originally posted by Metaru* also, if i'm rigth( and this is for the Joint), you shouldn't change the colors of the walls. You mean the outern walls? (the black part) Not shure.. Yes it looks like a jail
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