Pixel Joint Forum: Some crits please?

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   I need some help here, mainly with the city.

My goal is to have an epic scene, where as, a single hero looks upon a wrecked city which a large giant is destroying. I want the message to be: "Should I return and help?"

My issue is that, I just can't put all the detail I want into the city, and I feel the angles and perceptive is wrong. Also, I feel the monster isn't "menacing" enough.

I'd really appreciate some visiual examples, but overall, I'd just like any kind of advice.

Thanks in advanced.

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Mac The Rocker Seaman Joined: 23 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Topic: Some crits please? Posted: 10 April 2007 at 6:51pm
	I need some help here, mainly with the city. My goal is to have an epic scene, where as, a single hero looks upon a wrecked city which a large giant is destroying. I want the message to be: "Should I return and help?" My issue is that, I just can't put all the detail I want into the city, and I feel the angles and perceptive is wrong. Also, I feel the monster isn't "menacing" enough. I'd really appreciate some visiual examples, but overall, I'd just like any kind of advice. Thanks in advanced. http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/5177/collosyl5gd9.png">
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Metaru Commander Joined: 28 December 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 10 April 2007 at 6:56pm
	first advice: image tags are . use them. and second advice, save your images in Gif format. so the giant is suppossed to be destroying the city, or he already destroyed it?
	I ate leel's babies
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Mac The Rocker Seaman Joined: 23 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Posted: 10 April 2007 at 7:02pm
	Destroyed, or mostly destroyed. And I learned a while ago by accident that GIF lowers your ability to use colors, and I think I used image tages; [img] That's right, right?
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Ensellitis Commander Joined: 19 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10099	Posted: 10 April 2007 at 7:13pm
	gif doesnt lower your ability to use colors. there are over 10,000 pixel art pieces in our gallery that say so. and no, you didnt use bbcode.
	ಠ_ಠ There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross.
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Mac The Rocker Seaman Joined: 23 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Posted: 10 April 2007 at 7:21pm
	Sorry then, I have no clue how to use the IMG function on these forums
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Twizzler Midshipman Joined: 16 November 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 82	Posted: 12 April 2007 at 3:21pm


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Metaru Commander Joined: 28 December 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 13 April 2007 at 7:17pm
	they work like any other BBS codes. in this case, [IMG ]http://url.of.image.gif[ /IMG], without spaces, or just click on the button, and paste the url of your image, then hit ok. as easy as breath.
	I ate leel's babies
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