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    Posted: 30 April 2007 at 1:18am
yo guys. im the nub here, again. before i start to animate, i'd like to get some crits. this is a pyrrhocoris apterus (firebug) for a platformer game. whatdo you think? tell me!

any suggestions?
(sry for poor english)


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Quote Swenn Replybullet Posted: 30 April 2007 at 2:10am
Salutes!
I'm not the expert myslef but i guess you should try to make its back shield more "blinkin"now it looks very rough, also you might considering kicking out the outline's.Find a side view picture of the bug, and use it as reference.
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Quote Borgi Replybullet Posted: 30 April 2007 at 2:27am
yep.. i know its not blinking as much as id like to. now its more shinier, and ive made some changes on its antennas' too. and i dont know whats the matter with the black outlines :O



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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 30 April 2007 at 1:36pm

use a darker version of the fill color where the outlines are and see it by yourself.
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Quote Borgi Replybullet Posted: 30 April 2007 at 2:46pm

thanks guys. in fact, i can not see that much different, but u are the masters, so you know the "ways". so thank you.
any other comment?
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 01 May 2007 at 1:28am
work a bit more on those legs... they still doesn't fit the rest of the bug.
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Quote Borgi Replybullet Posted: 01 May 2007 at 2:44am
yop. ive worked a bit on it. now it looks more like a bug. but i couldnt figure out how to draw his "freeler".
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 01 May 2007 at 3:14am
look jalonso's bug
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Quote Borgi Replybullet Posted: 01 May 2007 at 5:26am
excuise me?! im not watching f1 :P
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 01 May 2007 at 8:55am
xD ah... not that Jalonso, our jalonso xD
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I don't believe in such things/persons.
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