Pixel Joint Forum: Sandman Sorta WIP

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   I like it the way it is, but it could use some work. CnC greatly appreciated.

I don't like anythung but the line work, truthfully. And the groin is off-center.

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PixelPusher Seaman Joined: 03 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 34	Topic: Sandman Sorta WIP Posted: 27 March 2005 at 8:27pm
	I like it the way it is, but it could use some work. CnC greatly appreciated. I don't like anythung but the line work, truthfully. And the groin is off-center.
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 27 March 2005 at 9:28pm
	Right now the chest of the sandman looks a bit like breasts and the head blends in a bit with the body. I like the shape and the larger forearms and hands. Just separate the head from the body and it'll help a lot.
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PixelPusher Seaman Joined: 03 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 34	Posted: 28 March 2005 at 12:09pm
	The head is supposed to blend with the chest, but should I remove the highlight from the chest? I agree, he looks like a sandwoman.
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Omegavolt Commander Joined: 03 March 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 227	Posted: 28 March 2005 at 2:38pm
	Maybe shrink the eyes and mouth so it doesnt look like they go all the way down to his chest. It will give the impression of seperation of the head and body without having to give it a neck. Maybe.
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