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Krysis
Midshipman
Joined: 01 May 2006 Location: Bulgaria Online Status: Offline Posts: 87 |
![]() Topic: Devil May Smile (Self-Portrait)Posted: 17 June 2007 at 6:35am |
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I've been working on this and it just doesn't seem good enough... I'm not very good with bigger resolution and I hope you' could give me a few tips, ideas and whatever else you wish... Thank you.
![]() EDIT: Thanks, jalonso... It looks much better now.
![]() So... What do you think? Anything wrong with it now? Edited by Krysis - 17 June 2007 at 1:34pm |
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jalonso
Admiral
Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
![]() Posted: 17 June 2007 at 6:53am |
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I see nothing wrong for the most part, but shall nitpick for you anyway.
• The pink shades on the flesh are too 'happy' and defeat the devil glow's impact. • The blackness of the hair flattens the volume of the head too much maybe some highlights? • The shading on the lower lip may be too harsh. Perhaps a more manga style coloring where the lip is colored from the bottom up and fades to flesh. |
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Aleiav
Commander
Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380 |
![]() Posted: 17 June 2007 at 6:05pm |
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I love the cool swirly shading effect on the face. Maybe some actual horns though? Those would look interesting.
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