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Krysis
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Quote Krysis Replybullet Topic: Devil May Smile (Self-Portrait)
    Posted: 17 June 2007 at 6:35am
I've been working on this and it just doesn't seem good enough... I'm not very good with bigger resolution and I hope you' could give me a few tips, ideas and whatever else you wish... Thank you.
 
 
EDIT: Thanks, jalonso... It looks much better now.
 
 
So... What do you think? Anything wrong with it now?


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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 6:53am
I see nothing wrong for the most part, but shall nitpick for you anyway.

• The pink shades on the flesh are too 'happy' and defeat the devil glow's impact.
• The blackness of the hair flattens the volume of the head too much maybe some highlights?
• The shading on the lower lip may be too harsh. Perhaps a more manga style coloring where the lip is colored from the bottom up and fades to flesh.
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 6:05pm
I love the cool swirly shading effect on the face. Maybe some actual horns though? Those would look interesting.
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