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Quote MashPotato Replybullet Topic: Medusa
    Posted: 16 June 2007 at 8:22pm
Hello, I've started working on a picture of Medusa (the snake-haired person from Greek mythology)
I know it might be a little too early to get much crit on it, but I would like to hear anything you've got .  Btw, I plan on making a lot of shadows so many of the snakes in the background won't be very visible (the background will fade to pure black).  Thanks!


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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2007 at 8:30pm
You have such a knack for ending up with beautiful and elegant art that I just know this will turn out amazing. I will only make a comment that may not be your style or thing...The eye is too beautiful, serene and even sweet looking. As you work on this remember that Medusa is evil at heart and the way to the soul is in the eyes. Be yourself but let her be her too.
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Quote MashPotato Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2007 at 8:40pm
You're too nice...
I know what you mean about the eye, though--I actually drew that several times, trying to give her a more "cold" expression that still remained feminine... I'm hoping that once I add some shadow around her eyes it will make a slightly more depraved look.  I will still try to do some small edits in the shape, though.  Thanks Jalonso
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 1:17am
maybe a more snake-ish eye, with the aid of some AA, will give her a more "predator" look. also, i was about to suggest you to use some CLAMP references for some hyper-streamlined eyes that maigth be a good reference. specially those from X ilustrations.

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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 6:08pm
This is beautiful. :D

Maybe giving her more of a snake eye would make her look more... venomous. :P
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Quote MashPotato Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 6:51pm
Thanks Metaru and Alejav, CLAMP-y snake eyes are actually just what I had in mind!  The snaky pupils aren't really apparent at the moment, though

Here is an update, with a possible palette underneath. 
I made the eyes a little thinner, with a slightly thicker outlining, and a more downturned eyebrow.
I will definitely be tweaking the palette, but this is the general colour scheme I think I'm aiming for, with coppery yellows shifting to reds.
Ignore the shading for now, it was mostly just me testing things out a bit


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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 19 June 2007 at 4:01pm
the pupil should be a bit (and just a bit)thicker.
 
may it sound obvius but, are you focusing the image to the eye rigth? 
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Quote MashPotato Replybullet Posted: 19 June 2007 at 7:07pm
In some ways... it's the centre of interest in the picture, but I'm not necessarily aiming for it to pop out at the viewer right away.  I'm hoping that by texturing all the snakes, the face (and eye) will be given extra emphasis by contrast .

Here is an update.  I'm trying some new things and attempting to dither a little... we'll see how it goes .  Oh, and I changed some of the colours from the palette below, so that's not up-to-date.



Suggestions welcome; thanks!
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Quote tuti Replybullet Posted: 19 June 2007 at 11:45pm
YES! this style is... very good! :P the eye and the dithering xD realy good! :P bye!


B_p edit: don't post the same image that's right above your post. Especially not without quoting - people might think it's yours.


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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 20 June 2007 at 4:25am
it's coming together very nicely, keep it up! :)
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 20 June 2007 at 10:09am
Damn, this is going to be awesome. Excellent work so far. I love the texture of the snakes. :) And she looks more sinister now.
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 20 June 2007 at 4:39pm

i could suggest you an small animation of the eye. but not now. please keep up the good work.

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Quote cassiechihuahua Replybullet Posted: 21 June 2007 at 2:46pm
This is looking really nice, the colors are also really nice.
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Quote MashPotato Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2007 at 7:52am
Thanks for the kind words, everyone 
Here's an update; need to finish off the snakes, then deepen the shadows (some of the snakes are too shiny) and tweak the aa.  Also planning on adding a bluish tone to the shadows.
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2007 at 11:52am
this really looks beatiful. maybe it's a bit late but.. is posible to move the eye a bit lower? i feel it's looking upward rather than looking foward
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2007 at 2:04pm
I almost want to see her mouth and a big, long pointed snakey tongue. :D:D
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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 24 June 2007 at 8:20am
the snake head near the eye has a nasty tangent with the eyebrow, and with the snake body to the right of it.. moving the head down a bit would fix both i think.

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Quote MashPotato Replybullet Posted: 24 June 2007 at 10:40am
Thanks--I had noticed the tangent before, but as an example of one-track thinking I tried to fix it with shading and didn't even think of changing the position .  I'm fixing that now, and have also altered the eye slightly.  Alejav, sorry, but no snake tongue in this one

EDIT: forgot to post the update!  This was done before changing the head position:




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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 24 June 2007 at 12:10pm
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 24 June 2007 at 2:29pm
well okay. The snakeys are so cuuute. :D
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Quote Kfuchoin Replybullet Posted: 24 June 2007 at 4:14pm
omg such a beautifull piece ToT
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 24 June 2007 at 6:40pm
Wow, had missed some progress on this. I just knew you'd make it look awesome. I am however surprised with the color choices. I did not see dingy browns happening on this. I envisioned blue/greens for some reason.
On a design note the perfectly vertical head of the snake head by the eye actually distracts from the eye a bit too much.
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Quote MashPotato Replybullet Posted: 25 June 2007 at 6:00am
Ah, I see what you mean about the snake head... it causes the eye to continue to go up instead of curling back toward the eye. I will make some adjustments to angle it a bit :)
As for the colours, I didn't want to go with green snakes as that seemed a little too "usual", plus I wanted to give somewhat of the feeling of a Greek bronze statue... I didn't think the browns were dingy, though! ^_~ I am a fan of saturated colours myself, but I've yet to learn how to use them well in pixel art.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 25 June 2007 at 6:25am
hehe, makes sense. I see 'you' as more marble than stone tho.
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Quote MashPotato Replybullet Posted: 25 June 2007 at 10:08am
For you-----> +50 niceness points 

Thanks for the help, everyone!  I've uploaded the image:
http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/22167.htm


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