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soda
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Joined: 19 May 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 224 |
![]() Topic: Slime WIPPosted: 16 July 2007 at 9:38am |
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I haven't done a pixel in a while, so I started this one. Just a quick sketch.
![]() ![]() Little edit, added more shadow to the right. I kind of got the monster idea from Blick on LoBD. So a lil' bit of credit to him. Edited by soda - 16 July 2007 at 1:15pm |
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soda
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![]() Posted: 16 July 2007 at 8:51pm |
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Even though I didn't get any feedback, heres what I submitted to the gallery.
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M.E.
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Joined: 26 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 430 |
![]() Posted: 16 July 2007 at 11:35pm |
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Hello Soda,
In case you want to work a little more on your slime, there are a few comments that I can make on it. Currently the slime resembles more like wood. I would have made the slime go in more directions. Especially the top is way too straight. Maybe you can drip some off his slime across his body so that it is more flowing. In general I would advice you to wait a bit for submitting to the gallery. Wait a day or two for feedback. I live in a whole different timezone than yours. I wanted to comment but the first one was really a bit too sketchy. So I waited for a second update. Also it would help if you ask questions on the issues you think need revision. Hope this helps. Either for editing your slime or next contributions. Best regards from M.E. |
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soda
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![]() Posted: 17 July 2007 at 9:14am |
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Thanks M.E., but I got rid of that slime idea and just made it into a monster. I was going to add drips, but I liked the way this looked. Thanks for the advice.
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