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Agent #1
Seaman 
Joined: 18 September 2015 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 20 |
   Topic: Crabman villagePosted: 26 July 2007 at 12:55pm |
I have no idea what I'm doing. Any suggestions? |
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jokun
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Joined: 27 April 2006 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 11 |
Posted: 26 July 2007 at 1:31pm |
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It looks like it's going pretty well. You've done a good job giving that doorway/opening some some depth, and the character design is nice. Keep at it.
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Hatch
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Posted: 26 July 2007 at 2:22pm |
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I really dig (get it?) the sand texture on the building. The spire at the top looks a little flat, and the inside back wall could use some texture.
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Agent #1
Seaman
Joined: 18 September 2015 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 20 |
Posted: 26 July 2007 at 5:19pm |
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soda
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Joined: 19 May 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 224 |
Posted: 27 July 2007 at 6:50am |
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That left building looks awesome, nice job on the texture, no crits here.
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Agent #1
Seaman
Joined: 18 September 2015 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 20 |
Posted: 27 July 2007 at 8:44am |
I think the water is going to be the hardest part. I should probably add another crab guy somewhere, too. Edit: And some different colors. 
Replaced the two darkest colors with black so I can get an extra color for the water. Edited by Agent #1 - 27 July 2007 at 8:51am |
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Hatch
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Posted: 27 July 2007 at 8:45am |
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Originally posted by Agent #1
I should probably add another crab guy somewhere, too. Yeah, he's looking a little lonely. 
I really like this. Keep it up! |
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soda
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Joined: 19 May 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 224 |
Posted: 27 July 2007 at 9:02am |
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I like the lower contrasted one better. But the second one looks good.
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Hatch
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Posted: 27 July 2007 at 9:03am |
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I like the higher contrast, but I think your sand colors got just a teensy bit too green.
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Agent #1
Seaman
Joined: 18 September 2015 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 20 |
Posted: 27 July 2007 at 9:06am |
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How about this?
Threw a layer of pure blue over it at 15% opacity. Edited by Agent #1 - 27 July 2007 at 9:06am |
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Hatch
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Posted: 27 July 2007 at 9:18am |
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Adding blue isn't a good way to neutralize green 
Anyhow, I think it's too blue now, and I think you'd be better served to handpick your colors. I still like it though 
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soda
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Posted: 27 July 2007 at 9:20am |
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Well, I thought it looked better with the lower contrast because it's under water, right?
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Hatch
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Posted: 27 July 2007 at 9:30am |
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Hum. I thought this was a seaside scene. I guess the anemone and the coral should have tipped me off >_>
Kind of throws my brilliant color advice out the window -_- Edited by Hatch - 27 July 2007 at 9:31am |
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soda
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Posted: 27 July 2007 at 9:33am |
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Don't worry, Hatch, I could feel the same way! Is on the beach or underwater?
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Agent #1
Seaman
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Posted: 27 July 2007 at 10:14am |
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Underwater. I'm going to add some kelp and stuff, and make the blue part at the top actually look like the surface of the water. Hopefully it'll look less beachlike.
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Hatch
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Posted: 27 July 2007 at 10:19am |
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Ah! Well, knowing that, I think I like the last one the best (the blue one). It looks the most underwater-y to me.
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Agent #1
Seaman
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Posted: 27 July 2007 at 11:43am |
I want to add some fish, and maybe some clams, but I am having trouble making the clam look like a clam. |
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soda
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Posted: 27 July 2007 at 12:01pm |
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Agreed, looks good.
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Sabata
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Posted: 27 July 2007 at 3:12pm |
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Yup! A fish will make it look underwater.
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We fall to rise again.
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Agent #1
Seaman
Joined: 18 September 2015 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 20 |
Posted: 27 July 2007 at 3:51pm |
I think I am going to submit this. |
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Hatch
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Posted: 27 July 2007 at 4:28pm |
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Looks great man! Nice job.
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