Pixel Joint Forum: Revision required for Yellow Slime ?

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GTK666
Seaman
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Topic: Revision required for Yellow Slime ?
Posted: 15 August 2007 at 9:33am

Type : PNG
Size : 64x64
Color : 5
Pixel art, no ripped, 100% by me.

"Revision required for Yellow Slime
REASON: We're sorry to inform you that your submission does not meet our quality standards or the art needs revision for some miscellaneous reason."

Why ?

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jalonso
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Posted: 15 August 2007 at 9:52am

I thought I added it, but guess not. Since another Mod did send it back you might as well refine it some. Some things that could be refined are...

• The AA on that black outlining is al wasted maybe change the black to sonthing softer and even a bit of selout?
• Soften the oversaturated and eye-burning yellow
• Add a bit of depth like a shadow or glow or something that places your slime IN the scene rather than ON the scene?

Maybe this helps :)

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GTK666
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Posted: 15 August 2007 at 10:01am

Waits, the rules are respected.
The style, it is nevertheless me which selected ^^
(black contour, colors, eye, ect...)

Edited by GTK666 - 15 August 2007 at 10:01am

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Larwick
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Posted: 15 August 2007 at 10:17am

GTK666, if you mean to say that you feel it's unfair we haven't accepted your piece because it suits the rules fine - i think you should re-read jalonso's post. By not accepting it we're helping you improve your art! Sit down for a bit and try out the things jalonso suggested to you, you may find yourself thankful you spent more time on it afterwards.

Don't worry. If you try, your piece will definetely be accepted (well.. to a certain extent

)

Edited by Larwick - 15 August 2007 at 10:17am

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GTK666
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Posted: 15 August 2007 at 10:52am

Actually, i want to make a series of pixel art by keeping this model.

It is for this reason that I would like not too to modify it.
I want to try well to improve it but I want to absolutely keep this style and this pallette.

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GTK666 Seaman Joined: 21 June 2007 Location: Belgium Online Status: Offline Posts: 17	Topic: Revision required for Yellow Slime ? Posted: 15 August 2007 at 9:33am
	Type : PNG Size : 64x64 Color : 5 Pixel art, no ripped, 100% by me. "Revision required for Yellow Slime REASON: We're sorry to inform you that your submission does not meet our quality standards or the art needs revision for some miscellaneous reason." Why ?
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 15 August 2007 at 9:52am
	I thought I added it, but guess not. Since another Mod did send it back you might as well refine it some. Some things that could be refined are... • The AA on that black outlining is al wasted maybe change the black to sonthing softer and even a bit of selout? • Soften the oversaturated and eye-burning yellow • Add a bit of depth like a shadow or glow or something that places your slime IN the scene rather than ON the scene? Maybe this helps :)
	PJs FAQ <•> Sticky Reads
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GTK666 Seaman Joined: 21 June 2007 Location: Belgium Online Status: Offline Posts: 17	Posted: 15 August 2007 at 10:01am
	Waits, the rules are respected. The style, it is nevertheless me which selected ^^ (black contour, colors, eye, ect...) Edited by GTK666 - 15 August 2007 at 10:01am
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Larwick Commander Joined: 18 July 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015	Posted: 15 August 2007 at 10:17am
	GTK666, if you mean to say that you feel it's unfair we haven't accepted your piece because it suits the rules fine - i think you should re-read jalonso's post. By not accepting it we're helping you improve your art! Sit down for a bit and try out the things jalonso suggested to you, you may find yourself thankful you spent more time on it afterwards. Don't worry. If you try, your piece will definetely be accepted (well.. to a certain extent ) Edited by Larwick - 15 August 2007 at 10:17am

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GTK666 Seaman Joined: 21 June 2007 Location: Belgium Online Status: Offline Posts: 17	Posted: 15 August 2007 at 10:52am
	Actually, i want to make a series of pixel art by keeping this model. It is for this reason that I would like not too to modify it. I want to try well to improve it but I want to absolutely keep this style and this pallette.
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