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   Actually i thought that the workmay be over. But then i ha some critics ) And decided to post it here. Maybe someone will tell me my mistakes and will help with advices and material.

The work was made on the wave of Stiven King's book "Dark Tower". Waiting for your's opinion. Thank you.

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Demon_in_me Seaman Joined: 06 August 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2	Topic: WIP: Born to shoot Posted: 20 August 2007 at 4:37pm
	Actually i thought that the workmay be over. But then i ha some critics ) And decided to post it here. Maybe someone will tell me my mistakes and will help with advices and material. The work was made on the wave of Stiven King's book "Dark Tower". Waiting for your's opinion. Thank you.
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Kfuchoin Commander Joined: 11 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 740	Posted: 20 August 2007 at 4:41pm
	make the shading more noticiable i think that the eye may be to low... it seems to be that you have 3 lightsources... by the way welcome to PJ we hope you enjoy your stay =) Edited by Kfuchoin - 20 August 2007 at 4:43pm
	may the pixels be with you.. ~Kfuchoin eMo looking for people for an RPG info: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4903
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pixelblink Commander Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865	Posted: 20 August 2007 at 4:53pm
	you've got some strange pillowshading which is making some things look bevelled. The gun looks out of place like it was a separate image that you decided to throw in at the last minute. His face altogether seems a bit of a mess... mostly because of that eye. Plus is "Stiven King" related at all to Stephen King?
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Demon_in_me Seaman Joined: 06 August 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2	Posted: 20 August 2007 at 6:02pm
	Kfuchoin "make the shading more noticiable" With pleasure )) But i reall afraid to make it too shady... Hm... "i think that the eye may be to low..." Hm... I made it as if he had a target - so he is aiming through the sight. His eye and his weapon's sight are in one straight line ) "it seems to be that you have 3 lightsources..." Yes. As you understand - i am novice... Now i am just trying to show all shades in one thing - by only 3 colors... To use less colors at all. Is it wrong? "by the way welcome to PJ we hope you enjoy your stay =)" Ah Thanks ) I hope i will mske some works to stay here ))) pixelblink "The gun looks out of place like it was a separate image that you decided to throw in at the last minute." Hm actually i have started from the gun... I made it first )) But i see, that the man and its gun are little separated from each other ) I dont know how to change it... that is pitty... "His face altogether seems a bit of a mess... mostly because of that eye." His eye... his eye... He is an abstract man, isnt him? ) He is not as real as he may be... I dont know why his eye myst be higher... And as i wrote earlier - he is aiming... I tried to make an effect of a man who is the one with his weapon... " you've got some strange pillowshading which is making some things look bevelled." Bevelled? Hm... may be it is silly - but i dont know must nhe be 2D or 3D.. "Plus is "Stiven King" related at all to Stephen King?" Huh.. )) I m not from englishspeaking country, sorry... I hope my english is not too bad ) .
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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 08 January 2026 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 20 August 2007 at 6:34pm
	the gun holster makes zero sense as does the face why so big? there isnt that much detail
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