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   Hello! 

This is my 1...2...3.... 2nd post. Hooray! Anyway, I am halfway through a room for the Joint. It's going to be just a plain apartment with bits and pieces on the big desk. I need some good ol' C&C and some ideas on what else to put on the desk. I think it's relatively decent... but that's my opinion. I have been doing pixel art months and seem to be getting good... but once again, that's for my viewers to decide.

I would ask for you to rate it out of ten, but it's not done yet.

EDIT: added a person.
EDIT2: made the screen on the TV better. Now it's not just a grey square.

Edited by Krakatoa - 06 September 2006 at 2:44am

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Krakatoa Midshipman Joined: 04 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46	Topic: First Joint - WIP Posted: 06 September 2006 at 1:37am
	Hello! This is my 1...2...3.... 2nd post. Hooray! Anyway, I am halfway through a room for the Joint. It's going to be just a plain apartment with bits and pieces on the big desk. I need some good ol' C&C and some ideas on what else to put on the desk. I think it's relatively decent... but that's my opinion. I have been doing pixel art months and seem to be getting good... but once again, that's for my viewers to decide. I would ask for you to rate it out of ten, but it's not done yet. EDIT: added a person. EDIT2: made the screen on the TV better. Now it's not just a grey square. Edited by Krakatoa - 06 September 2006 at 2:44am
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 06 September 2006 at 9:42am
	Nice so far. I think the desk is too wide compared to the figure. The window could use a little bit of an indentation into the wall, they are too flat right now. As to what to put on the desktop just pile it on. Books, food, magazines, bottles, computer, game consoles, lamps, etc. While the walls look OK maybe a picture or poster on the wall will look good and break the planes. The desk drawers also seem to long. Break them into 4 drawers per side, or 6. Thats it for now. KUTGW
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Krakatoa Midshipman Joined: 04 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46	Posted: 07 September 2006 at 12:15am
	Thanks for the advice. I'll update this post as soon as I make the changes.
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Pixel_Agent Seaman Joined: 26 November 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Posted: 26 November 2006 at 11:20am
	Maybe you can add a chair aswell and a few more windows Edited by Pixel_Agent - 26 November 2006 at 11:20am
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Pieface Commander Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146	Posted: 26 November 2006 at 12:52pm
	Please Pixel Agent don't bump older topics, allow them to be bumped by the creator if they need it
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volcom Commander Joined: 17 August 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 272	Posted: 24 August 2007 at 5:39pm
	the two red walls are to much of different shades, and the floor is just...green.
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Blueberry_pie Rear Admiral Joined: 24 July 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2176	Posted: 24 August 2007 at 11:25pm
	volcom, don't bump old threads. The post right before yours said so, for crying out loud.
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