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Krakatoa
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Quote Krakatoa Replybullet Topic: Kitty
    Posted: 22 September 2007 at 5:33pm
I don't think this looks good enough on the body... I want to know how I can improve the shading on that to make it looks like the collar and head.


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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 22 September 2007 at 5:59pm
Moving to WIP section.
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Quote BlackDragon Replybullet Posted: 23 September 2007 at 6:53am
OK, first off, you have somewhat decent lineart. No jaggies. It can be improved though. The shoulders can be wider, peice can be not mirrored, etc. The other major thing I see wrong is that you did a gradient (pillow shading, actually) instead of shading. The gradients use too many colors, and in pixel art we try to have the lowest color count possible.


Edited by BlackDragon - 26 September 2007 at 12:34pm
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