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Krakatoa
Midshipman
Joined: 04 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46 |
![]() Topic: KittyPosted: 22 September 2007 at 5:33pm |
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I don't think this looks good enough on the body... I want to know how I can improve the shading on that to make it looks like the collar and head.
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jalonso
Admiral
Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
![]() Posted: 22 September 2007 at 5:59pm |
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Moving to WIP section.
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BlackDragon
Commander
Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 729 |
![]() Posted: 23 September 2007 at 6:53am |
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OK, first off, you have somewhat decent lineart. No jaggies. It can be improved though. The shoulders can be wider, peice can be not mirrored, etc. The other major thing I see wrong is that you did a gradient (pillow shading, actually) instead of shading. The gradients use too many colors, and in pixel art we try to have the lowest color count possible. Edited by BlackDragon - 26 September 2007 at 12:34pm |
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