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Varock Shade
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Quote Varock Shade Replybullet Topic: WIP - Pure Evil Of Love Pixel (Revisit)
    Posted: 16 November 2007 at 12:03pm
A long while ago, I made this piece for The "Good and evil challenge." I had been thinking to renew it some day, and so I started a new piece with the same idea behind it.
  
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I will keep the same canvas size, turned horizontal (which is within the rules of the old challenge) But i will make my own palette this time. (Colours are far from definitive, its only to make difference in colour between smoke, grenade,heart and bg)...
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Quote skamocore Replybullet Posted: 16 November 2007 at 6:01pm
great idea, I love this piece, and this will look great remade with a nicer palate. I really liked the grenade from the Original, the shading at the texture turned out nicely.

Your new smoke (the smoke on the left side) is looking a bit...uh...lumpy?? It kinda looks like it could be a bunch of grapes. The bottom right smoke is looking a bit nicer though.

Also your new heart is looking quite good at the moment, but I think you should make it appear more as though it is coming out of the grenade, like it is in the original...
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Quote Larwick Replybullet Posted: 16 November 2007 at 6:16pm
Yeah make sure your smoke isn't too grape-like. I really like the new composition, good luck.
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