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volcom
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Quote volcom Replybullet Topic: Walkway w/man
    Posted: 13 December 2007 at 2:54pm
 
i know i'm a loser and i gave up at this forum a while back, cuz i stunk. I finally found the patience to actually "pixel art" and this is my first "real" WIP. It just started, i decided im better shading as i go and not to outline.
 
-i will add a man walking down, any suggestions on road or grass, theres much more to do.
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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 16 December 2007 at 8:47am
You seem to be getting no comments, so i'll comment you.
 
Well, I gotta say, it looks really flat. Looks as if someone painted it on a wall. As the path goes backward, it should get skinnier, and less detailed. The grass in the front should be shorter too, so that you can see it lining the path as it goes back(if thats the intention). Making scenery on a transparent background looks kinda odd(unless you are drawing a rock or a tree or something). And lastly, it should extend back more.
 
Just don't give up. Please.


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Quote greenraven Replybullet Posted: 16 December 2007 at 9:58am
Is the man going to be walking left to right, or up and down?

An um, yar, don't give up. Keep at it.
"pwnage comes with patience, practice and planning." ~ Jalonso   
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