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Quote mooology_22@hotmail.com Replybullet Topic: water monster thing
    Posted: 06 January 2008 at 5:58pm
i need some crits on this plz
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Quote greenraven Replybullet Posted: 06 January 2008 at 5:59pm
On what? There's nothing there. 
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Quote Hatch Replybullet Posted: 06 January 2008 at 6:10pm


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Quote surt Replybullet Posted: 06 January 2008 at 6:56pm
It seems rather lacking in visibility at the moment, making it difficult to crit, also if you increase the visibility level I think it would look much more interesting too.
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Quote mooology_22@hotmail.com Replybullet Posted: 06 January 2008 at 7:19pm
thankyou hatch you have seemed to have put it on properly.(just converted to mac which works differently) there is something there(well there is now)
Does anyone no of a macintosh image converter?? all the images that i have submitted after getting photoshop on the mac have been invisible.i need some help here!!

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Quote mooology_22@hotmail.com Replybullet Posted: 09 January 2008 at 2:12pm
ok i think i have got it. plz reply as to if this is visible.
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Quote promiser Replybullet Posted: 09 January 2008 at 3:50pm
no it's not

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Quote mooology_22@hotmail.com Replybullet Posted: 09 January 2008 at 4:14pm
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Quote Hatch Replybullet Posted: 09 January 2008 at 4:14pm
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 09 January 2008 at 5:20pm
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thankyou hatch you have seemed to have put it on properly.(just converted to mac which works differently) there is something there(well there is now)
Does anyone no of a macintosh image converter?? all the images that i have submitted after getting photoshop on the mac have been invisible.i need some help here!!


You need to have your image document setup correctly.
Use 'save for web' with transparency checked, GIF only not PNG.

I just added 2 free photoshop like programs in the resource section for mac.
Layers, pencil etc. Perfect pixelart programs. Check them out.
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Quote MashPotato Replybullet Posted: 09 January 2008 at 5:32pm
Now that it's visible () I think you have a very nice start!  while keeping this very simple and cartoony would be fine, I think adding at least one more shade between the darkest orange and the base orange would help smooth things out a bit and could be used to add some aa.  Rounding the eyes a little at the top and bottom would look nice, I think--you can try it out 
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Quote mooology_22@hotmail.com Replybullet Posted: 11 January 2008 at 3:17pm
thankyou ill try that. where is the mac resource section? and what is aa? ill add in the extra colour.
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Quote mooology_22@hotmail.com Replybullet Posted: 11 January 2008 at 3:30pm
ok this is the revised version and if there is something to do with aa please explain it to me before u say anything about it

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Quote BlackDragon Replybullet Posted: 11 January 2008 at 5:00pm
Broken image :(
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Quote Hatch Replybullet Posted: 11 January 2008 at 5:02pm
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Quote mooology_22@hotmail.com Replybullet Posted: 11 January 2008 at 5:31pm
thankyou hatch (how do u get it on there)?
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Quote Hatch Replybullet Posted: 11 January 2008 at 5:55pm
You have to use the address of the actual image rather the gallery page. Example:

[img]http://pixeljoint.com/files/icons/monster9731629355_iaza_0.png[/img]

[img]http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/28502.htm[/img]
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Quote mooology_22@hotmail.com Replybullet Posted: 12 January 2008 at 11:43pm
oh thankyou
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