Pixel Joint Forum: satanic pumpkin ritual

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i was in the mood for something halloweenish with a gothic style matching that of medievil the game and nightmare before christmas.

so i came up with this sketch 

before i begin to refine the line art, is ther something i should add or remove.
thanks for the c&C

Edited by spartan_117 - 13 January 2008 at 7:33am

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spartan_117 Commander Joined: 14 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 478	Topic: satanic pumpkin ritual Posted: 12 January 2008 at 8:40am
	i was in the mood for something halloweenish with a gothic style matching that of medievil the game and nightmare before christmas. so i came up with this sketch before i begin to refine the line art, is ther something i should add or remove. thanks for the c&C Edited by spartan_117 - 13 January 2008 at 7:33am
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BlackDragon Commander Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 729	Posted: 12 January 2008 at 8:52am
	Reverse the grip on the knife so his "hand" is behind it. Maybe have only one eye? Enlarge canvas maybe? More dynamic pose? Its supposed to be scary right?
	"A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie
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spartan_117 Commander Joined: 14 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 478	Posted: 12 January 2008 at 9:00am
	he is fleeing from the crime seen (the house, might leave the door part open) can u please explain what you mean by more dynamic.
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spartan_117 Commander Joined: 14 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 478	Posted: 12 January 2008 at 9:06am
	updated: made him sneer to make it look like he did something evil. noe he doesnt have to worry about being eaten or sprayed by pesticides. Edited by spartan_117 - 12 January 2008 at 9:15am
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BlackDragon Commander Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 729	Posted: 12 January 2008 at 9:16am
	Quick edit This is what I mean by "dynamic". You can exagerate further by bringing up his mouth more. Edited by BlackDragon - 12 January 2008 at 9:19am
	"A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie
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spartan_117 Commander Joined: 14 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 478	Posted: 12 January 2008 at 9:19am
	aaaaaaaaaaaaaah. you gave me a great idea. thanx. i will make a sketch later now i have to sleep.
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spartan_117 Commander Joined: 14 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 478	Posted: 13 January 2008 at 7:25am
	quick sketch. its a demonic ritual now. knife in right tentacle and heart in the left. im going to be working mor on the hand anatomy. Candle is main light source.( should be interesting)
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spartan_117 Commander Joined: 14 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 478	Posted: 13 January 2008 at 8:49am
	since no one is commenting i assume the composition is ok so i started blocking in some basic color for the pumpkin. is the lighting so far compliant with the position of the candle.
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E-Bomb Midshipman Joined: 02 December 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 72	Posted: 13 January 2008 at 8:53am
	The candle is to the left, not up, the shading is appearing as if it's top-left.
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spartan_117 Commander Joined: 14 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 478	Posted: 13 January 2008 at 9:04am
	like the opposite of my left, you are right fixed it
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spartan_117 Commander Joined: 14 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 478	Posted: 13 January 2008 at 9:50am
	thought of doing it more cartoonish
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