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purpletree
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Joined: 28 December 2007 Location: Belgium Online Status: Offline Posts: 151 |
![]() Topic: ok sorry another wip...rainbowPosted: 15 January 2008 at 1:11am |
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ok relly sorry but i have time to work on a bunch of pieces
![]() this doens't meet the quality of standards... so help me i reckon this looks fine but most of u don't think so please help me.... |
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Hapiel
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Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266 |
![]() Posted: 15 January 2008 at 4:06am |
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If you have much time.. why dont you put more time in editing that tree first? Why dont you put time in studying how light works, search for general drawing tutorials etc?
Ok, now back on topic. I think the rainbow can be improved a bit, but a boring rainbow will never get accepted, even if its the best rainbow there is! You will have to be more creative. The idea does not meet the quality standards. If you really want to draw a rainbow, try making a scene with a rainbow in it! expand the idea, be creative! But ok, if you want to improve this: remove the weird and random aa, add green and violet on the places they are needed, slow down the animation, remove the background, make it 8 colors max (rainbow = 7 colors + transparant background). Now try that yourself. If you really have as much time as you say you have, you can experiment and try and try untill it looks great. Save the old versions, and edit them over and over. Compare, witch one looks better? Why? what looks worse? can I combine the good parts? etc. |
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greenraven
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Joined: 08 September 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2598 |
![]() Posted: 15 January 2008 at 9:00am |
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So how many WIPs do you currently have? Just wondering.
As for fixing this, I dunno. Seem ok to me. |
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Metaru
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![]() Posted: 15 January 2008 at 11:33am |
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i do suggest to quit this and focus on your tree for now. it's fine, but at the same time its nothing, just a cicle of colors and nothing else.
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I ate leel's babies
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purpletree
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Joined: 28 December 2007 Location: Belgium Online Status: Offline Posts: 151 |
![]() Posted: 15 January 2008 at 12:31pm |
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ok i have a lot of wips but sereiously i have that time anyway...
the tree is finished to me maybe not to most of u but i have no idea on what to improve... i updated the lst version so please c&c on that! |
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Hapiel
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Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266 |
![]() Posted: 15 January 2008 at 12:49pm |
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If you have time, why didnt you do what I said yet?
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