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   This is my work for the weekly challenge. just simple lineart here 

Edited by Kee - 28 January 2008 at 6:40pm

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Kee Commander Joined: 06 September 2007 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 127	Topic: Etch-a-Sketch-monster Posted: 28 January 2008 at 6:35pm
	This is my work for the weekly challenge. just simple lineart here Edited by Kee - 28 January 2008 at 6:40pm
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Blu Commander Joined: 23 January 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 208	Posted: 29 January 2008 at 12:24pm
	Hee. :D Awesome concept. I'd make the nose less prominent... Like, just do either a small line for the bottom of its nose or make the triangle-looking nose not as long. The line that would serve as the arch. ...Does that make ANY sense? >.< I'd also try to make the fangs look a little more pointed. Good luck. ^^
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Kee Commander Joined: 06 September 2007 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 127	Posted: 29 January 2008 at 4:44pm
	@bluwriter-i fixed the fangs and the nose. hope they're better @all-Theres some color now. ill work on the knobs so dont worry. And then i got to do some animating Edited by Kee - 29 January 2008 at 4:45pm
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Blu Commander Joined: 23 January 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 208	Posted: 29 January 2008 at 6:00pm
	Huzzah! ^^ Good luck, I'd recommend a light source and some glare on the "screen". :D
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purpletree Commander Joined: 28 December 2007 Location: Belgium Online Status: Offline Posts: 151	Posted: 30 January 2008 at 12:59am
	yep its a good idea. but with the details yo've got right now it would never get through... and is it even possible to draw that on an etch-a-sketch.. just curious thats all..
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Kee Commander Joined: 06 September 2007 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 127	Posted: 30 January 2008 at 5:28am
	@bluwriter-Thanks! thats a great idea. @purpletree- Umm idk if you can acually draw that but for the weekly challenge it has to be a household item, wiht a monster on it. so idk. and i know its not very good, that is because of school taking up most of my time. i have a cold-day today so i will work hard :]
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purpletree Commander Joined: 28 December 2007 Location: Belgium Online Status: Offline Posts: 151	Posted: 30 January 2008 at 11:59am
	ok then Kee. good luck!~
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Amorphous Midshipman Joined: 12 September 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 60	Posted: 30 January 2008 at 12:42pm
	Hmm..by looking at this, I'd say that you really need to put a little depth on this. Currently, there's no shading and so the image looks flat. Also, the monster itself doesn't look too-monstery. I think it really needs a little more personality than just a face on a screen. I know this is early in development, but see if you can refine the monster before you move too far.
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Kee Commander Joined: 06 September 2007 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 127	Posted: 30 January 2008 at 12:42pm
	Thanks for the advice!
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Mantis person Seaman Joined: 30 January 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14	Posted: 30 January 2008 at 8:15pm
	I think it would be cool if the monster was drawn onto the etch-a-sketch piece by piece or something, then the face starts moving. I dunno, just ideas.
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Blu Commander Joined: 23 January 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 208	Posted: 31 January 2008 at 6:11pm
	Mantis, that would be AWESOME. Difficult and time consuming, but AWESOME. You can't seperate lines. Hrm. Maybe try to make it so that the face is either...more complex or have it so it's all connected, but looks better than just a bunch of lines connecting it. :P (And, you can make curved lines. It's not too easy, but if you're good enough, you can)
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