Hello Skamocore,

The lighting is much better and you attempted to make
the pose a bit more interesting.
The initial piece has a better structure of a pine-apple,
so you might be checking the differences.
As always it is best to have some sort of reference. So
you could check out some pictures / websites that have
the pose that you are after in real life. You can always
adjust to your needs, but it is helpful to have some sort
of anatomic reference.

Best regards from

M.E.