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Jijii
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Quote Jijii Replybullet Topic: [WIP] Alien Snail
    Posted: 17 February 2008 at 4:39pm
Hello, I am new, very new.. I'm working on my first real creation, that I actually want to finish, but I am nowhere in thought of knowing how to finish it to make it look how I want. I know everything from the bottom to top needs work, but I need ideas/help, please be rude enough to get me making this creature look pleasable. Thankies.


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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 17 February 2008 at 4:58pm
Well for one clean up your lines.   Look at the swirl inside his shell - there's random pixels sticking out from the curve, that's a huge no-no. 

also, lose the shading for now, it's not doing anything for the piece, just distracts you from the jaggedy outline.

*whips* now get to work =D


Edited by leel - 17 February 2008 at 4:58pm
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