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Quote MorningDew Replybullet Topic: [WIP] ISO Kitchen
    Posted: 05 March 2008 at 4:59pm
Alright, so this is my first attempt at any iso drawing, so be kind  I am in the process of adding color and details. I would appreciate any advice anyone has 
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Quote BlackDragon Replybullet Posted: 05 March 2008 at 5:06pm

Oh, this looks great so far.

No crits.
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Quote MorningDew Replybullet Posted: 05 March 2008 at 5:15pm
Thanks! Makes me feel better about moving on from the lineart.
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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 05 March 2008 at 5:32pm
Have you been looking at any tutorials or references?
 
Cite your sources.

RPG is numberwang.
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Quote MorningDew Replybullet Posted: 05 March 2008 at 5:42pm
This is the tutorial I was reading on ISO... http://www.19.5degs.com/element/837.php

I have found it insanely helpful.


Small update, still working on color blocking...




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Quote old_flick Replybullet Posted: 05 March 2008 at 7:42pm
Nifty.  The only crit I notice is with the refrigerator.  The doors are slightly different sizes, and the handle on the right door needs to drop down a pixel or so. 

*crappy edit attempt*
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Quote MorningDew Replybullet Posted: 05 March 2008 at 7:58pm
Ok, Thank you very much for noticing that.



Here is my edit, and some updated outlines and colors... now I have the sink to do and then the smaller details...



OOOPSSS!!! Ok, fixed the wall color




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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 06 March 2008 at 3:26pm
I'd avoid using black outlines on stuff.  Try a darker beige. Where's jal and his quick iso tutorial?
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Quote MorningDew Replybullet Posted: 06 March 2008 at 5:53pm


Ok, so that does look better :) Still working on the sink...



Ok, so I am not sure if I am happy with the sink, but I am going to start working on some details.


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Quote diamondsea Replybullet Posted: 13 March 2008 at 11:26am
awesome! great work!
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Quote Pixel_Outlaw Replybullet Posted: 13 March 2008 at 11:39am
Your ellipses are a bit off. Go ahead and use the ellipse tool.
 
Your sink looks like a hexagon and the burners in the stove should be twice as wide as they are tall.
 
There are ridged constructions for circles in this projection. Anything drawn improperly becomes an ellipse in the 3d version.
 
Have a look here:


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Quote hiddddde Replybullet Posted: 13 March 2008 at 12:17pm
When I looked at this
It remind me at
From: http://www.rhysd.com/tutorial/chapter6.html

I think you should make the innerlines dark instead of light. Now it looks like plastic and than more like something massive.
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Quote Pixel_Outlaw Replybullet Posted: 13 March 2008 at 12:47pm
sh*t that guy can't make perfect circles worth beans either.
 
Well, if this is ripped art locking should commence.
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Quote MorningDew Replybullet Posted: 13 March 2008 at 12:58pm
I did not rip this, but I did use that tutorial, which I have posted. And thank you, I will take a look at my circles.
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Quote Pixel_Outlaw Replybullet Posted: 13 March 2008 at 10:23pm

You really should start fresh. The tutorial is too ridged for you to really branch out with a pre made design.



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Quote MorningDew Replybullet Posted: 14 March 2008 at 6:37am
I agree, and I do not plan on submitting this to my gallery. It was more of a practice for a 1st iso drawing... I just wanted feedback before I started something bigger.
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